the evel bite

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it was a dark and stormy night when SAM one who was a vampire her self walked into Frankie's restaurant when all the lights turned off some lady named allymae screamed who is it ! owwwwwwwwwwwww! screamed a Little boy. he got the evil bite .everybody screamed in terr .it was the night before Christmas! vampires took over the city of Tacoma. many family's moved because of the terr.many stay because they didn't want to leave there hometown.2

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  • TheDigit
    January 16
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    wow

    And you said my work sucked? right..


  • rocker4life
    December 17, 2008
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    no

    ha wow alyssa your retarded


  • Someday Hero. gold member
    December 17, 2008

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    *blinks*

    It's spelt Evil. When a Character talks it's better to put " those. It's also spelt Terror.