A love Story - 1st date

The story starting from the beginning of this year , on summer , in Thailand at Jasmine Hotel that I work for. That place’s where I found the real love with Aless , the person I care for very much.1

Seemed like the busy evening today. Suddenly , a beautiful voice told me , “Good evening Miss , do you have room available for tonight ?” 2

I was busy with all my documents , then I asked him to wait for me a moment as I didn’t notice that was a handsome guy stood next to me. Finally , I had done my documents , I lift my head up and tried to replied him  “Yes , we got room available for tonight” I was surprised at the first moment I saw him , he was sweat on his face , I felt so strange inside , something changed in my mind and my heart beating so faster as it’d come out. He decided to take that room and asked me more if possible if he wanted to stay at the hotel for 10 days. “Yes !” I answered. Everything went on very well and I knew that I fell in love him at the first sight , I wonder if he feels the same ?3

During his stays , we had met everyday but it was because of we were both too shy , then we had not talk at all , just only a polite greetting with each other , but it wasn’t bad as much as he thought I had a boyfriend already. Untill the last 4 days before he gone. At 7.00 pm , I had over with my shift already and I was about leaving there in soon. 4

Aless wanted go to night-market and asked my friend how to get there , she didn’t know as well how to get to night-market as I do , she asked him back if he didnt mind to go there with me because I was going to there too ( she was lying to him and I didnt wanted to go there too ! but It was ok because it liked a date ! ) 5

The 1st Date :6

Was the bus , we chose to take for go to night-market , we took it ! Oh my god , a lot of people took the bus together with us , it was so bad smell in there but we pretended it was fine but wasn’t really for me ! I couldn’t bear it anymore ! The dinner was set at the Chinese restaurant as I prefered Italian food is better but he didnt want to because he’s an italian. I admitted I didn’t eat much tonight because he always looked at me , he gazed in me every my step ! 7

The crowded people around there made me sick and was my bad shoe hurted my foot also ! “babe , I think we should go to there for rest your feet a bit before , I see you are pain with your foot a lot” He said and took me to the chair at the bus stopped. Was only one chair around there , what is his romantic ! I sat on that chair as he was sit on the floor and tried to massage me on foot. He had seen a big shop and asked me to wait him a second because he wanted to buy a new shoe for me. We held our hands untill sweat and kept walking to the flower-market ! While we walked around the flower market I saw a bouguet of beautiful white roses “This is so beautiful roses !!!” I got an idea to buy it for him to thanks for today and for surprise him !!! It was work out ! he was so shy and his cheeks was red as tomato ! 8

“This is so wonderful , I have never got flower from lady , I feel like I’m a prince , I love it. Thank you !” He said that. After I had had a long walk , we ended our night with a night club and countries music , he had a glass of beer and a glass of pie-apple juice for me. We started talk with his job as he works in the ship and he tried to explian about his work , well I didnt understand at all ! Just a topic took our time for an hour already and it was late enough for go back my apartment now.  “Aless , Time to go back my apartment now , Its really late now !” I said to Aless “Ok, I’ll take you to your apartment”  The taxi was what we prefered this time , on the taxi , we were talking about the special we had today “Today is really a special day for me , I have never relaxed like this before , I laugh a lot because of you and you had laughing louder with very big smiles , you’re so nature ! ” Aless said , “This is praise , huh ?!?!” I replied , he smiled and told me back “ Yes, it is. And tomorrow I want to invite you for dinner cruise too , I hope so much that you won’t decline me” He gave me a little kiss good night , it was so warmth and sweet taste as I’m still remember that taste untill now. About 30 minues later , I got a phone call , I was mad and curious who was call me this time ! I picked up the phone and found that was him ! He rang me up as he wanted to say he safety back to the hotel and reminded me again that “Dont forget our date tomorrow night ” before we hanged up the phone. I had to choose my dresses again for date tomorrow ! I couldn’t wait for tomorrow , what will happen tomorrow ? Will I get something more than a kiss ? Who knows that ? 9

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  • Cheeky paper
    October 10, 2005
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    Thnks kid! The first stepdaughter in russian!


  • DuchessAura of Brie silver member
    October 10, 2005
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    eniglish is my second languge too, but youd never tell! im actually russian! but if you tell the school here that its your second language then they give you speech and language classes! they'er awful!!!
    <3Lia<3

  • Cheeky paper
    May 15, 2005
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    Yes , english is my second language and I'm really sorry that this story has a lot of of error spelling and grammartical... I'll try to make it right soon. Hope you don't mind that and I'm glad you enjoyed this story.
    Edited on May 20, 11:43 because ''.

  • LaBelle
    May 14, 2005
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    This sounds like it came from experience, which is probably not the case for every other entry for my contest. That's cool. I have a question, is English your second language?

  • CountryCousin
    May 14, 2005
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    This is cute.

    I must admit that you should keep this up and you have done well by writing this one. I have written a book with the poem in it and right now it is in a movie producer's hands. This story has not ended here has it.


  • May 12, 2005
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    Really cute love story but what's next ??? Go ahead !! I wanna read it , wanna know what's about your second date !!! I enjoyed read it a lot.

  • Heather.x
    May 8, 2005
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    yeah i do i love your writing

  • Cheeky paper
    May 8, 2005
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    Thank you very much !!! really I'm not a good writter but I just wrote it by my knowlagde only and I'm really happy you like it !! Hope you enjoy my writing..

  • Heather.x
    May 8, 2005
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    omg! that rly is amazing, so much better than mine! you rly are a gr8 writer and i love your stuff. it sounds lyk you rly do love him. i would love to see what happened next, but nyways that was an amazing write by an amazing author! keep it up huni, if u wna tlk to me bout anything feel free. heather x x x

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