He leaned against the car.1
His heart sank with every step she took.2
Another step and she moved away from him, away from their love and their future together into some other future where she lived and loved without him.3
He watched her leave.4
His feet craved to run after her.5
His arms wanted nothing more than to hold her.6
Her fragrance perfuming his breath; the smooth silk of her hair caressing his face; her fingers moving along the nape of his neck; the warmth of her breath while she whispers honeyed syllables in his ears; the gentle brush of her lips against his own before a bittersweet kiss; just her body against his own was all he wanted to feel in that moment.7
Yet he simply watched her go.8
Although this pain was tearing apart his heart every second he never let it escape from his eyes. He had so much to say to her still, so much of life still to live…9
A silent prayer escaped him.10
Looking up to the heavens, he pleaded.11
He pleaded for a miracle, anything to bring her back.12
***13
She was walking away, away from him, away from their love and their future together into some other future where she would live and love without him.14
She felt his gaze burning on her back.15
She wanted to turn around and run to him.16
His arms around her waist holding her tight; the look in his eyes that said it all; his sunburst smile; his fingers running through her hair; that comforting sound of him breathing slowly; the warmth of his lips on her neck; the passion of his bittersweet kiss; just his body against her own was all that she wanted to feel in that moment.17
She let this pain tearing apart her heart escape from her eyes.18
She had nothing to say to him but so much of life still to live…19
A silent prayer escaped her.20
Looking up to the heavens, she pleaded.21
She pleaded for a miracle, anything to make him stop her from leaving.22
*** 23
He heard his heart crying out her name with every heartbeat.24
A single tear fell from his eye.25
She closed her eyes only to see his eyes begging her to stay.26
“Don’t go.” He whispered almost inaudibly, choking on the tears now streaming down his face. She opened her eyes and turned.27
A slow smile shone on her tear-streaked face.28
She ran into his open arms, crying and laughing at the same time.29
He laughed and cried with her, his arms around her waist, holding her tight while her fragrance perfumed his breath…30
Author notes
Hi.
This is another attempt to capture yet another moment.
Hope you enjoy reading it.
Do drop in your comments and suggestions.
Luv n good luck
Pia.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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This was so well written. The description is just..wow. You can really see the scene, its so vivid and real. Is this from your imagination, or did this happen? either way-its beautiful. Great flow, it felt natural. I enjoyed reading it
~blessings~
~rora -
this was far more than an attempt...it captured the moment perfectly...it was well written...with good flow...and raw emotions that threatened to overflow at any second
