Angel,1
Evening was heavy,2
Trying to find a relief3
Chanting away thy name4
The bell did ring5
Opned6
Lo.there i saw an angel7
Joy in her face rediating8
Flowers in hand smiling9
Seconds did freeze10
Wished it was etenal.11
Flowers, she thought made me glad12
No,13
Her joyous face added bliss.14
Give me that bliss15
I’ll part with all.16
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Comments
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amazing poem! rediating is actually spelt radiating though! lol. thats the only thing i can say apart from it was totally awesome!!
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nice.noted.it has general significance
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Great going
Nice
I wish though your poems aren't about me
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