It was 6 in the morning.. 1
You called to wake me up for school.. 2
I knew today was going to be a great day. 3
for u were there.. 4
I jumped into the shower.. 5
After I dried myself off.. 6
I slipped on my clear pink thong.. 7
I grabed a skirt and a cute little shirt.. 8
I didnt wear a bra that day... 9
I heard the car horn..10
As I got in some hooker heels. 11
and ran out to your car.. 12
You saw what I was wearing and said someone is being a naughty little girl.13
I quickly said wanna take care of me??..14
We pulled off the road we were on..15
And got onto the road on which you live.. 16
We pulled up to your house. 17
You said your mom was upstairs...18
We walked into your room.. 19
my pussy dripping wet..20
There on your bed 21
was your mom and dad22
we asked if we could join in..23
so we grabed a spot on the bed24
your mom handed you a condom25
and said use one if u like..26
You said no that you rather raw..27
You unbuckled my pants. 28
and Took up my shirt29
I grabed your pants. 30
and lifted off your shirt..31
You licked my body down to the belly32
Then you mention my nice trim..33
I respond with I did it just for you..34
You start sucking on my clique untill I cum35
I flip over and I am on top36
I slid down to your hard dick37
I blow on the top 38
then take it all in39
Your dad saw what I did40
looked at your mom 41
and said bitch do this..42
she qucikly did what I was doing.. 43
untill both you and your dad cummed..44
Then I felt your nice hard dick45
enter my pussy.. 46
O' it felt so good..47
I moaned a groned untill I couldn't anymore48
then you picked me up 49
and we fucked on the wall..50
Your cummed all inside me 51
let our juices flow together..52
It felt so good..53
Your dad came up behind me54
and said did you ever do a train55
I said no56
You said then dad wanna join??57
You dad slipped in and gave it to my ass58
while you were beating my pussy..59
You mom then came up60
I wanted something to do61
I asked her to come naked 62
into the room63
she did as I said..64
I told her to sit on my cheast 65
and put her pussy in my face66
I ate her out untill she cummed..67
Then your mom said she wanted a turn68
so she ate me out while you 69
gave it to her..70
Then your dad said suck my cock71
like you did my sons..72
So I did.. Your dad cummed all in my mouth73
then I knew how he made you so good..74
I wanted more and more we did that untill the phone rang75
It was the school... 76
the principle was comming over with the assistant..77
to make sure we all were okay.. 78
Your mom said sure come on over......79
PLEASE COMMENT AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK.. SHOULD THERE BE A PART... 2.... 80
What did you think? Please comment!
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this was really um...intense.
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that was disgusting and then your wearing pants what the
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I personally found this well...disturbing. I didn't like it but again that's just my opinion.
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unsettling
I didn't really enjoy this, but that's just a matter of preference. You should probably put up a warning in the message under the title letting people know about the content. It is likely to offend or disgust alot of people.
I also think you need to work on your writing. Your sentances are a little off, and you have some consistancy issues. (You started off wearing a skirt, then went to pants, his mom was upstairs, then wasn't, etc.)
In regard to your question at the end; No. I don't think there should be a part two. -
You sick insest fucking-redneck.
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um...ew...
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hot
The sentences were a little clipped but the story was certainly hot.
a wonderful read.
thanks,
John -
weiird
its kinda gross and the format is really weird, it should be straight prose -
Honestly... it wasn't very good. Not to criticize what is going on in the poem, but the writing is just... hrm.
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that is sick and disgusting...and i suppose moderatly brave...ok...yuck...i guess
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