What Life Is

Life is a heavy weight boxing match. We're going to get hit and knocked back and eventually knocked down. But only the strong will get up and continue to fight their way to the top.

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  • Dreams of Insanity
    December 23, 2008

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    I agree with Lavanya. Reminded me of Darwin's law, but still, this piece was great.
    I really loved the simplicity of it, yet the strong meaning. Good luck in the contest.


  • lavanya
    December 23, 2008

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    Darwin's law????? but you know his was bit boring ....but you put so much in his law , now it is like master piece. i like analogy you used in your quote . very nice and deep thought . well done dear ....good luck .


  • Melli
    December 16, 2008

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    Thats really good. It's very true, and a bit inspiring. Great job, and good luck. Thanks for entering!!!!!

    KEEP WRITING!!!

    -Melli<33