Janet's Death and Rebirth

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I was wondering what was happening. Was I dead? Did I survive that fall? How did I get here? My mind was racing. "David!" I had to know. I couldn't just lay here all day wondering about what was happening. I had to take action!2

Like my father, I would never let anyone help me. "Is there anyone here?" I had to get up so I did. My legs were numb, that had to be at least one hundred feet. I started to run, "David!" my legs were starting to regain feeling. "I'm going to save you from that old witch!"3

I ran as fast as I could. Still I wasn't seeing any light. The entire place was dark grey, almost balck. I couldn't think anymore. I thought I was running for no reason. It seemed to have no end. My emotions were flaring. "I love you David!" my hair was getting into my eyes. I could feel my heart beating, almost as if it was trying to escape from my chest.4

Was I having a heart attack? Was something happening, changing me? I was running faster and breathing heavier. It hurt. "I'm coming!" my head started to throb.5

My legs gave out and I was stuck on the ground. I had to get out of this horrible place! This was scary enough without the light, but now I could barely move. If there was anyone her they wouldn't be friendly.6

I decided I would take my life. I had to figure out how. I was so scared. There was a piece of paper in my pants pocket. I wrote down what I was thinking.7

-David,8

I know that you have always thought I hated you but... what I've noticed within the past four days that we spent together... I love you. I need you to love me. My soul will not rest until I know.9

-Janet10

I bit my wrist as tightly as possible, "Ouch!" blood was shooting from my wrist with every heartbeat.11

I heard the words, "We're loosing her! Call in doctor Morrison!" I knew now what was happening. I was trapped in my head and I couldn't get out.12

Then I heard David's voice, "Please Janet! Don't die! I... I... I love you!" my heart started beating faster and faster and I was loosing more and more blood.13

BEEP! The machine flat lined. I was dead...

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  • Darkhearted
    December 18, 2008
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    why is this particular story in here 2 times????


    • Chonch95
      December 20, 2008
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      Sorry. I meant to give it the title but it came out as a 1 and I didn't know how to delete or change it.