Love Defined

Love is like your favorite album by your favorite band, and suddenly, it gets old and you can't stand to listen to it for a long time.
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Love is like an ocean tide, rolling, covering all, then receding as fast as it came.
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Love is like the clown at the circus, shooting out of the canon, leather jacket on fire, arcing through the air, then falling, falling to find there is no safety net.

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Love

I wrote this for a contest pretty recently...it came from some life experiences and some expectations of the future. (:

beezy92

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  • KeepDriving
    January 7

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    Thanks for entering the contest. I liked the quotes and how they defined the word "Love". One of the rules for the contest was that the piece had to be at least 200 words, so the highest award I can allow is an honorable mention. But, I did like the piece. Thank you for entering.

    -Jenny


    • beezy92
      January 7
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      Ooops. And I remember seeing that! Sorry about that. I'll enter something else. (:


  • lavanya
    December 23, 2008

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    beautiful quotes dear.....most true and realistic is second one. ilike how u discribed love . very nice imagery in these lines...i m sure you are very deep person. good luck hon.


  • Dreams of Insanity
    December 23, 2008

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    Wow...I loved all of these, but mostly the first and god it is so true. I hope you do well in the contests! You wrote some great ones here!


  • NightTime-Fox
    December 18, 2008

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    Thanks for the entry... I kinda makes me think of certain thing I remember of love and the settings most people think of when they think of love.


  • Living.Disaster
    December 14, 2008

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    Nice I like it.
    I wouldn't have been able to think of those

    Good Luck in The Contest.

    • beezy92
      December 14, 2008
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      Hey this was the last entry before your contest closed and I had a couple more I wanted to add...do you think you could let just two more entries in? I know that's asking a lot.


      • Living.Disaster
        December 14, 2008
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        ....okay but You better get there fast


        • beezy92
          December 14, 2008
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          Uh oh, did I miss it?


          • Living.Disaster
            December 14, 2008
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            no but you better hurry up and enter them!

            • beezy92
              December 14, 2008
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              It's still closed right now...or at least that's how it's showing up on my computer. I've been refreshing for five or ten minutes.


  • Melli
    December 14, 2008
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    already commented(: Thanks.

    KEEP WRITING!!!

    -Melli<33

  • Melli
    December 14, 2008

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    Gosh All of those are amazing No kidding. Hehe, but really, they are. My favorite is the one about the favorite album, but the last one is also amazing. good job(:

    KEEP WRITING!!!

    -Melli<33

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