"So..." Erins dad looked at her, "How's your leg?"
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Erin shifted awkwardly on the uncomfortable couch. She looked up at her dad, "I could use some ice. But other than that I'm fine." she grabbed the piece of glass like she was gonna pull it out.
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"Don't do that!" he pulled Erin's arm away.
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Erin pushed him, "Stop! It hurts! Ouch!!!!!" she was holding the galss in her hand. Her dad made her pull it out.
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"I'm sorry!" he felt so bad, "I'm gonna take you to the hospitol." he took the glass and put it in a Ziploc bag. "Do you want me to carry you?"
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Without an answer he picked her up and ran out to the car. "Dad... I... I'm dizzy..." her voice trailed off. She was either dead or passed out. Her dad didn't know. She was loosing a lot of blood.
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"We're almost there sweetie."7
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"Amerrah Rose Newman!" Amerrah's mom yelled when she saw the puke all over the walls, "Get your butt out her this instant!"
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Amerrah laughed, "Why are you mad at me?" she asked, "I puked. That's not my fault. I'm still s-" she puked on her mom.
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"AAAAAAAH!" she fell over, "Bill!" she called out for her husband, "She puked on me!"
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Bill walked in. He saw puke everywhere, Amerrah was still puking. "Amerrah." he tried to say calm, "Get in you bedroom right now!"
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She tried to get up but she couldn't. Each time she even moved she would puke, "I... can't." she was sure that her stomache had to be empty now. She'd been puking for thirty minutes. That had to be some sort of record. Her entire body was so limp. "Help." she was crying, "I-"
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Bill picked her up, "When I put you in your room you are staying." he walked down the hall and opened her bedroom door. Her room was covered in puke too, "What did you do!" he dropped her then slammed the door.
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Her uncontrolable puking was slowing down. She started to pray. "God, I know I don't talk to you that often... can you please... let me live?" she continued to puke. Five minutes later the puke was almost done. She could feel it going away15
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"We're here baby." Erin's dad picked her up and carried her in, "I... I love you Erin. Please don't die."
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He carried her to the receptionist, "What happened!" she yelled.
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"She was throwing a ball and it boke the window and a piece hit her in the leg. She did't want to come to the hospitol." he started crying, "She tried to pull it out but when I pulled her hand away she kept it in her hand. She's bleeding a lot." He took the shard of glass out of his pocket.
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The receptionist ran around the counter, "That is the biggest gouge I've ever seen." she took her out of his arms and ran to one of the rooms.
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"Don't let her die!" he yelled, "I''ve only had her for two months!" 21
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wooooow. thats amazing
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Pretty good write. Could go a little more in depth, but not bad.
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What do you mean in depth?
I don't know like what you mean. I didn't really get out all of my ideas so it didn't come out right but Ithink it kind of shows what I was thinking.
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Wow that was good, not exactly what it was looking for, but i liked it.
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Sorry I didn't write something of your interest.
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