♥ Every Moment {I Love You} ♥

Every breath you take, I thank the Lord for you,
Every time you smile, another life is saved
Every laugh, is another moment of life well spent, with you
Every time you cry, a life is taken,
Every hug, is warmth in this cold world,
Every time you're there, there is light within the darkness
Every time we touch, we are two souls linking as one,
And everyday we spend together,1

Is a memory of Heaven, captured in your eyes, hidden within your kiss, whispered in your breath, flowing through your hands, shining in your smile.2

I love you.3

Author notes

Started out as a quote for my mood on SW, then decided to post it, then decided to expand it into a poem instead xD Hope you like, felt random and needed to ease some of my writer's block.

And also, this is dedicated to Star - see it's actually happy now! Wuffles you!

Random, this was originally supposed to be a quote but I expanded it into a little poem.

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  • Just Breathe.
    December 16, 2008

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    Wow, this is really good. I luffles it! So beautiful! Great job!


  • Someday Hero. gold member
    December 13, 2008
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    *Thought of Ash...*


  • Dreams of Insanity
    December 13, 2008

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    I feel so touched lovar x3
    Great poem!
    You should write happier stuff more often! It was beautiful!

    • Be.Your.Own.Hero
      December 14, 2008
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      Thank you lovah! *nibbles your ear* x3 Hehe, I may be hyper but I have trouble writing happy stuff without making it corny But I'll try You're beautiful!

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