Excerpt: The Afterlife

The walls were liquid, melting, streaming upwards like a jungle waterfall paused on video and then played in reverse. A man stood, his back arrow straight, dressed in a suit, in a seemingly endless puddle as wide as the mouth of the universe. He knew not where he was or even who he was. The liquidness seemed to have affected even his most essential reasoning abilities.1

Author notes

..Kidnap the Sandy Claus... and I have no idea where that is from.

* ladamarosa

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  • LiveLoveJabberwocky
    December 25, 2008

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    Wow! That was awesome! Really, very well written. I'd love to read more. The title definitely intrigued me...Yeah, I would really like to see the outcome. Really great job, thank you for entering!