Once there was a Goddess who strolled through the Garden in the early morning dew. Upon tiring she rested herself on the Great Rock under the Old Oak in the center of the Garden to ponder the existence of love. For you see, Goddess had a great capacity to give and to receive love, but she had no one with whom to share her heart, her Love.1
As silence rolled through the garden and Goddess searched the depths of her soul for meaning and purpose, unbeknownst to her, a lone Lily was watching this rare beauty from behind the rock. As Goddess remained deep in thought and the Garden slowly came to life in the early morning hours, Lily remained concealed in her hiding place, undetected; unnoticed. 2
You see, Lily had been trampled many times before. Her delicate bloom had been harshly plucked and destroyed so often that she learned to stay hidden in the shadows, never revealing her true beauty; her Love. There had been a time when Lily would cast her petals to the sun for all to see and show her glory, but after suffering disease and cruelty from passersby and the harsh elements, Lily finally learned to hold her soft, delicate petals close and wrap her leaves around her stem as a protection from further harm. 3
Eventually, Lily just stayed hidden behind the rock, out of view from anyone strolling in the Garden, until Goddess. Lily watched Goddess intently from her hiding place, knowing better than to reveal her presence. But as Goddess continued to stay and sit quietly, curiosity got the better of Lily, so she peeked ever so slightly from her hiding place.4
What Lily saw as she slowly tipped her pale petals around the edge of the Great Rock moved her with great compassion. There were tears on the face of Goddess. How could such beauty be in such pain? What could possibly hurt such a delicate creature so much that would cause her to want to be alone in this Garden and not be around others? Why would she not want to display her beauty? Lily could not understand why Goddess was here, but mostly, could not understand why she was suffering alone. Lily hurt to see the tears fall from this creature of such beauty and grace. 5
Lily had already experienced such pain in her time, dare she try again? Dare she attempt to reach out and console this vision of loveliness? Lily withdrew into her shadow of safety to ponder her dilemma as Goddess wept bitter tears. Then almost without another thought, Lily found herself straining to lean forward and gently stroke the hand of Goddess. Feather light her petals were upon the skin of this amazing beauty, Lily wasn’t even sure that she had touched her, and yet, Goddess jumped as if stabbed completely through with a dagger.6
Lily shrank back into her shadow, expecting the worst. She knew what was next, as it had happened so many times before. A cruel word of ridicule for the misshapen Lily, or a foot to trample what was perceived by the one there as a weed, or even worse, to be plucked from her beautiful home only to have her delicate bloom perish in a glass of murky water. She worked so hard to offer each bloom for the Garden. Oh how it hurt to have them plucked.7
But, as Lily waited, and waited, and held her petals with her delicate leaves, nothing happened. No smacks, no cruel words, no painful plucking. Slowly, Lily unfurled herself from her leaves and lifted her petals to see what Goddess was doing. There was no way to prepare Lily for this encounter of her precious, pain-filled lifetime. Goddess was smiling at her through her tear-stained eyes. OH! Dare she hope? Dare she dream? Lily slowly raised her petals a little higher, an offering of friendship, yet not too high that she could quickly retrieve them if a cruel hand began to come her way. But, there was no cruelness in the face of Goddess. Only Love shone from this Beautiful One.8
Lily raised her petals more and once again gently stroked the tender flesh of the hand of Goddess. Goddess’s eyes sparkled as new tears formed, but the smile that accompanied them were obvious to Lily, that they were tears of joy. Lily strained for all she was worth to reach this creature of loveliness, but could reach no further, and finally sank back in despair. She knew it, it was too good to be true. Lily felt hopelessness wash over her once again as she withdrew back into the shadows to be alone and leave Goddess to her thoughts.9
Just as Lily hung her head, she felt a gentle stroke on her petals. What a wondrous sensation! She had never felt such a fantastic feeling before and when she looked, Goddess had turned her body so she could reach Lily and sit next to her. Goddess reached down and lovingly stroked Lily’s petals and leaves, cooing to her that she was the loveliest of all the flowers in the garden. Not because of her beauty alone, but because of her gentleness and Love. Now it was Lily’s turn to weep with joy at this display of love and affection. She had never known kindness before.10
As the two new friends sat together in the Garden, there at the Great Rock, they loved on each other; Goddess stroking Lily’s petals and Lily, gently brushing against the legs of Goddess. Goddess marveled at the silkiness of Lily’s lush petals as she lovingly stroked each one in turn. Goddess became almost intoxicated with Lily’s fragrance as she sat and inhaled deeply of her delicate friend.11
Lily flourished under the gentle and graceful fingers of Goddess, enjoying each tender caress on her pale petals that had been hidden away from the rest of the Garden for so long. She was even a bit self-conscious to have such a vision of beauty as Goddess touching her, as some of her petals had grown back deformed from the years of abuse and neglect. She was not the most beautiful flower in the Garden, but Oh! How she loved Goddess.12
As the hours passed, these two spoke not a word, as how could a Goddess and a Lily exchange words? But theirs was a Friendship that bonded instantly and they knew that words were not necessary. They seemed to know what the other was in need of. Goddess had someone to Love and Lily, she had someone to love her. Each had their deepest needs fulfilled that day as they sat, loving each other, healing each other, fulfilling each other.13
And as twilight approached, Goddess softly bade Lily farewell, promising that she would return on the morning’s dawn, and somehow, Lily knew this was a Goddess she could believe in. And for the first time in their lives, they both slept peacefully, knowing there was someone in the world that cared deeply and called them Friend.14
Author notes
A special gift for a new friend who sees me as I truly am...and loves me anyway. For: goddesskevauna
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Comments
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AH, very beatifully written, great discriptions. Amazing beauty is seen. Great, it kept me reading all the way to the end, and i enjoyed reading it
I've never actually read something quite like it, thats what makes it better. It's funy how everyone thinks there same that its great
but
Thats because it was
xxx from mars, keep pen to paper.
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Ahhhh, that beautiful sensitive side that I remember so well. You are such an amazing beauty, Bella. This is exquisite, just as you are my lovely flower. I kiss your hand.
Juan
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Ancient Goddess,
First... Love your motto...Sugarland has talent and second, thank you for your comment on this piece. I am so glad that you took the time to read and reply. It means so much to me.
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i love it ! its so.. cute and orginal write more!
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giveachance,
I am overwhelmed as I follow and see where you have been in my work today. Thank you for your kindness today.
Lily ~* -
excellent
Excellent story. I loved it. -
Haran,
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on this personal piece for my friend. I am happy you enjoyed it. Your comment was very touching for me.
Lily ~* -
Leo,
Thank you for the and the BIG ...much appreciated after such a rough week.
Lily ~* -
This is just wonderful, What a tribute to a friend.
For You and
A special BIG
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Exquisite!
Lily, I am so touched by the gentle sweet beauty of your story, such a loveliness in their friendship, a comfort and a "knowing" without words, each saw the beauty in one another, Lily had so much compassion for the Goddess and the Goddess saw such strength and beauty in the gentle flower.... just an amazing story, really my sweet friend, excellent! All the best, Annie
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Tudor,
Guess I owe you extra 's and 
for super staying power through this piece then huh?? 
Thanks Handsome for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment! You are amazing!
Lily ~* -
Firstly I hate reading long poems or stories, saying that this kep me reading, so it had to be good which it was, the imagination and the thoughtfulness that went into this story was superb, well done Lily, another great write from you
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Thank you for the comment. Lily ~*
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Hey that was great. It was like a wonderful metaphore of feelings that people go through. Great JoB
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This is so beautiful and chocked me up too. I hope you find many more such friends, a beautiful Lily as yourself deserves such love and friendship.
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I can't believe I waited too long to read this! No, thank you!
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Don't ever wonder..........
THIS WAS FOR YOU BEAUTIFUL GODDESS!! THIS WAS ALL FOR YOU!
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slowdncr,
Thank you for such an amazing comment on this humble piece. You are wonderful for being so kind.
Lily ~* -
OMG!!!!
It is so beautiful! ~sniff, sniff~ I'm okay. Really I am. You stole my breath away! Thank you Ms. Lily! You are so shweet!
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A very sweet and uplifting story, Lily (no coincidence, right?). It has all the merits of a classic fairy tale or Disney (Pixar?) short. Very well written.
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Thanks Beautiful One... as to my Friend...besides all the Wanderful ones that have seen it... the otherone has not seen it yet
I have tried to drag her off of her paper work...to no avail. Soon... and then... we PARTAY!! ♥ for you my Friend! and scones too!
Lily ~* -
What a beautiful story, Lil...you've done well, my Friend...I agree with the other comments; I can easily see this as a fairy tale worthy of sitting beside The Brothers Grimm, Mother Goose, & Hans Christian Anderson stories...Your Friend must be overcome with tears at the thought of your feeling so deeply, let alone at the thought of your writing of it in such a graceful & loving manner...Brava, O Delicate One... 
Wanda
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Once in a while...something besides erotica comes out... Thanks for reading and leaving a comment Zorro.
Lily ~* -
well that was a cute little write. it was so sweet I think I just might have a cavity starting >;o) keep up the great work.
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you sure it's the story???
Thanks Moyta for such a wonderful and touching and lengthy comment. Oh and for alllllllll of the applause too! 
's you seen FC around tonight??? I'm missin' my cabana boy lmao
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*tears* yea...this is beautiful...even got me a bit choked up Lily. Awesome story! :.M.o.y.t.a.:
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Dear 'wocky,
Thank you. Coming from you, this is the best compliment ever. 's
Lily ~* -
LavenderSadism,
Thank you for such a generous comment on this piece. I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and reply on it.
Lily ~* -
CountryCousin,
Thank you for such an encouraging comment on this story. Your words were most uplifting for me.
Lily ~* -
suseann,
Thank you for such a kind and generous comment on my story.
Lily ~* -
O Wonderous One,
The honor is all mine that you have taken the time to read and comment on this very personal piece. Thank you so much for such a kind and loving reply.
Lily ~* -
Precious K ,
I am so glad to see you here on this piece. I have missed you so much this week. Thanks for reading and commenting sweetie! You made it extra special.
Lily ~* -
Dear One...thanks for catching that. Will change asap. Glad you liked the story. Close to home for me.
Lily ~* -
Bravo Lily dear, bravo indeed! You have opened your heart and let the words come pouring forth. This has to be one of the most touching things I've ever seen you pen. It's just beautiful, on so many different levels!
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My mouth is hanging open, there are tears in my eyes. This was absolutely beautiful. I will read this repeatedly in the next hour.
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Masterpiece
This story is priceless and is so awesome and I hope that you will be able to get it published it that well done. I truly was captivated by your fine write. -
A very pretty and demur write. Mystical and a good story theme too.Suseann
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This is truly amazing my friend. You have penned a beautiful story here that will touch and delight the hearts of all those who read it. You talent stretches from one end of the spectrum to the other and you never cease to leave me in awe of your talent. Thank you for such an enjoyable read dear.
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My dear sweet Lily, this was tremendously touching, totally heartfelt, and an amazing write. I shed a fair few tears reading this, and so wanted to reach out and soothe those petals, and dry the tears of the goddess. You have put so much genuine emotion into this, and by the comments I see you have touched many with your words. You continue to inspire those around you, and show such love, compassion, warmth and genuineness. You truly are an Angel on earth, and I think you are amazing. Much love, hugs and kisses K xx
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beautiful, just like the author
Ms. Lily, this is so beautiful, one of the best things i've read on this site. it's so full of emotion, heartwrenching and uplifting all at once. an absolutely splendid piece of work. i adore the personification of the flower.
much love and happy thoughts for peace hugs, D
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Puppydog,
Feel free to copy this. I am honored that you are so touched by it.
Lily ~* -
FANTASTIC!
As the tears are falling down my cheeks I will say this is one fantastic story my dear friend. If I may I would like to copy this so when I feel down I can read this and feel the love and understanding that you have shown in this fantastic story -
johnslw2002,
Thank you so very much for such a wonderful comment. I truly appreciate your reading and commenting on this personal piece. Lily ~* -
outstanding
great story, very touching and beautifuly written, you deserve all the happines and kindness that you can get, keep up the great writing -
FC,
Well now...you are borderline sentimental and we cannot have that!
Thanks FC for such an amazing and touching comment on this piece. I am so happy you liked it.
Lily ~* -
Caitlin-the-cheese,
thank you so very much for taking the time to read and comment on my story. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Lily ~* -
Lily, my goodness, you truly are a precious lily that deserves all that friendship and kindness... I loved this story with great understanding, and it's nice to see you put this into words and on this site. I am appreciative to be able to see this as I am sure all of your friends here are...
FC -
awww..this was such a sweet write! it had such a sweet message behind it- and the language you used was simply lovely! when I read it, I just went 'awww!' lol- you write with an assured confidence, and this write was lovely (blah- I have no adjectives right now, lol)
in a word, beautiful. well done! -
Ken,
I am deeply touched by your kind and generous comment on my story. Your compliment means more than you can know.
Lily ~* -
So very well written and touching. Lily you are just outstanding and your works are always one of a kind
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Araina,
Thank you for your wonderful comment. I am so happy that you enjoyed this tale. It was emotional for me to write, because it was filled with so much truth.
Lily ~* -
This was so incredibly beautiful... it reminded me of a parable from a classic tale. Stunningly penned, and the story in it was breathtaking. So sad, but full of hope and a happy ending; I wish you the best. Friends are the best gift in this world
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Credit must be given to my wonderful friend goddesskevauna...she accepts me as I am and does not try to question my every move or change me. Thank you Dear William for your kind words of encouragement. I cherish them.
Lily ~* -
Excellent
WOW Lily, I love this story, you should seek to publish your works they really are so good. I find a lesson here, we find friends in unsuspecting places, and love is returned if love is given. Bravo for a wonderful write my friend. -
ayten,
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I am touched that you were so moved. This was emotional for me to write. This is my life. Thankyou again.
Lily~* -
Very beautiful.... i'm sorry i really want to say more but i'm to emotional right now. This was so beautiful...still having a haard time finding a better word.
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