Set Apart From The Rest (3)

As we drove in the car, i could smell my city floating away. Everything 1

that I once knew was disappearing before my eyes. I asked my dad where we2

were going, and he said Colorado. Colorado?... Colorado?! I had never 3

been in the country in my life, and i didn't want to start now. I was so 4

not looking forward to this. As we drove, I saw hundreds of gas stations,5

tons of trees, and billboards. But what I noticed most, were the people 6

in the other cars. I would just look at them, try to see into their lives7

and try to make up a story for them. I picture some of them rich and 8

having great lives, with beautiful children and wonderful spouses. Some 9

I see them on the streets begging for money just to feed themselves. Its 10

amazing what my mind can create. I start to slip into a light sleep. I 11

glanced at the clock, and it blinked 11:35. I looked up and saw the sign 12

WELCOME TO COLORADO pass by me. Almost there I thought. Almost.13

Author notes

Ok, i had to finish it. There you go guys! If you have any ideas for this piece, IM me with them! Talk to you later guys!

Love,
*Hannah*

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  • sp-hidden lies
    May 9, 2005
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    ummm....? don't know?

  • SexyAngel0418
    May 6, 2005
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    Hey Hannah!!! This is an awesome story!!! You are doing a great job!!! Keep it going is all I can say ...

    Hugs,
    Beth