A sentence full of Human Nature

Away from the torment of his peers, the young boy skipped across the busy street, alone and unaware, into the safe, protective arms of his mother. 1

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  • Prodigious.Mirth
    January 6

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    The protection of a mother is so sacred and pure and when it comes time for a child to know that his mother can no longer protect him as much as she would want to, then the child begins to learn the nature of humanity.

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    WELL DONE <3
    Blair


  • jauhar
    December 22, 2008
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    This was written well full of human nature indeed.

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