amor est??? Love is... ugh

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Love is 2

intoxicating, but still it sobers you 3


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deaf defying, but it can kill you. 5


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weakening but in it lies untold strenghts 7


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blinding but without it you can't see 9


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lies but in life there is nothing more true 11


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never but forever 13


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motivating and devistating 15


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heartbreaking and healing 17


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love is not what you see but what you believe in 19


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even true love has its ending... 21

Author notes

sigh... what love is is KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!

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  • Cadburry melted
    December 24, 2008
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    thank u its how i feel since i'm havin a bad love experience (heart break) o i kinda know the good and the bad


  • lavanya
    December 24, 2008

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    beautiful ..very sweet choice of words and very creative . i must say that i m smelling gold for you in this contest...so go for gold dear..good luck.


  • Cadburry melted
    December 12, 2008
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    haha Save me from myself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Luckyk
    December 12, 2008

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    Pssssshhhhhh then they tell me I need a life I mean come on really...Girl u need saving. Not from nobody from yuhself. I in gine lie and say dat it bad cause it good but you tuh siddown n actually write it in such phrasings, u either sprung or as I sed need saving from yuh self


  • LoneWriter
    December 12, 2008

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    this is.....wow... I am basically speechless

    I love how you worded this! It was simple, but had so much meaning behind it. My favorite example of love though would have to be paragraph 7:
    weakening but in it lies untold strenghts. I've never had love explained in that phrase before.

    Thankyou for this amazing entry!
    ~Lone

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