The Wishing Star (poem)

If I wish upon a star1

will I wake up where you are?2

Will you be there holding me?3

and will I feel really free?4

If I wish upon a star5

Will I wake up with a car?6

Will I wake up with a boat?7

or will a have a real fur coat?8

Does the star thing really work?9

Does it come with all those silly perks?10

Well I don't care to tell the truth,11

I will do it for the youth.12

Star light, Stary Bright13

Biggest star, I spot tonight14

If your there and if you care15

Please tell David16

I am there.

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  • longing-for-love-16
    December 19, 2008

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    Aww hunni this is really cute
    I <3 you baby girl
    Me, you and Dave need to spend some time together during the break. I actually miss him and I really really miss you
    xox


  • Dassy
    December 11, 2008

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    this was an excellent piece. the whole fur coat and boat and stuff thing was kind of corny, but it still worked cuz it rhymed!