Piggy has a dream

Once upon a time, there was a . Every night he had the same routine. He would pet his , he would sing a few 's, and then finally check his . He would look at the then finally get in bed ready to go to sleep.1

On this particular night, said a special er and then drifted off to sleep. had a very strange dream this night, and this is exactly how it went.2

It was 's birthday and he was so excited. was there, and so was , , , and . But the dream got stranger and stranger as it went along.3

First, brought some and everyone started to drink it except because it was against his religion. So he drank instead. Finally, brought out the . took one bite and spit it out. Not wanting to be rude, politely asked what the heck was in that cake! 4

smiled brightly and held out some suddenly, as if by majic, appeared and pulled out a and downed it in one gulp. Soon, had everyone drinking alchohal. pulled out some 's and shoved them down 's throat. began choking, when he finally calmed down. ran out the door and into the front yard, surprised to see standing right in his front yard. stared amazed at his one and only hero and screamed: "I pitty the fool!!!" 5

saw clip cloping up the front yard holding a . "sorry," said shoving the into 's arms. insisted he open it this second. opened up the and pulled out a 6

"I wish was on a deserted !!" shouted at the top of his lungs. opened his eyes, finding himself on an with no one around but him, and a tree and some dirt. screamed.7

Suddenly woke up, his alarm was going off and was barking for his breakfast.

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  • Fallen Star
    April 4

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    Lol! This was cute. (: I never thought of writing a story in emoticons! You did a good job of it! Nice work! Keep it up!

    (P.S. - You should make a sequel! has a Dream!)


  • Patchwork Comedy
    January 22

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    OMG!!! THAT IS GREAT!!! I WAS GOING TO USE 'I PITY THE FOOL' AS ONE OF MY QUOTES!!! YOU MUST HAVE READ MY MIND!!!! SUPER DUPER SUDOKUDOS TO YOU FOR READING MY MIND!!!


  • flowerbee1234
    January 10

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    This is good! I love how you used emoticons to describe the events, but I have one thing. I don't think beer, drugs, and alcohol would be good for a child. Good luck in the contest!

  • lovetoloveyou
    January 6

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    hehe how cute... poor piggy... this made me smile all the way through. xD... I pity the piggy as well...

    *piggy*

    Good luck


  • Cheerful-Panda
    January 6

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    haha how cute!
    poor pig he was having a fun party and then things went nuts! this is really cute, and i love how you used the emotes really well good job!
    i liked this it made me laugh.

    Mira =)


  • MeganDanielleJonas
    December 15, 2008

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    RHADICAL: )

    haha.I love the part you added at the end. this is the coolest story everr. you should totally write another one. this story entertained me. and I think the kid sitting next to me was reading it too


  • Toxic Paradox
    December 11, 2008

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    Aw thank you so much for entering... I really appreciate it. This cheered me up no end after a 5 hour shift!

    Thanks.


  • MrsSpunkRansom
    December 11, 2008
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    LOl....this is...um...odd.


    • Dawn Bon
      December 11, 2008
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      lol i know right! i had the whole class laughing!!!

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