Love is...

Love is jumping into the ocean when you don't know how to swim,1

Having a hand to hold when things are looking grim,2

Just following your heart and living on a whim,3

because you've found a someone and you belong with him.

Author notes

I've been in love before...there are bad sides but if it was that bad there would be nothing worth fighting for.

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  • lavanya
    December 23, 2008

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    i love your explantion dear ..you are so true about love ..i can see how enthusiastic you are ...sorry if u r not but through your explantion i felt that...well done and good luck dear.


    • hug-it-out
      December 24, 2008
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      thank you so much. and yeah i've been known to get reckless when it comes to being in love.


  • laughoholic
    December 12, 2008
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    i have no idea

    ... i have no idea y.... lol


  • LoneWriter
    December 12, 2008
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    Hmm, I thought I had already commented on this

    Anyway, this is very true. And not everything about love is a sprinkled cupcake. I love what you said in your author notes probably more than the contest entry. I think I've found that to be more powerful
    Great Job,
    ~Lone


  • laughoholic
    December 12, 2008
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    slightly

    but rite now im REALLY confused


  • laughoholic
    December 11, 2008
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    once again

    OK
    ! sarah soo beautiful!!!!!
    and still very very very confused!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Dragonbabyx3
    December 11, 2008

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    Awww so sweet, Its very true though, and I have to admit there are bad sides to it as well.... I've been married 5 years...and I know that all too well


  • Drake Drakenheart
    December 10, 2008

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    Ah, I love it! Short but perfect! I totally know how you feel. Sometimes you feel so strong for that special someone, just maybe love isn't a strong enough word!


    • hug-it-out
      December 10, 2008
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      :D

      thanks...and yeah it's better to write when i'm fully inspired.

  • lovetoloveyou
    December 10, 2008

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    The color is slightly blinding... but good. I know if I make any other comment, it's going to sound wrong and I'll get an "O...kay..." reply. I'm not very good at this kind of comment.

    I've had to start this comment over three times, because of this...

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