Love is.

Sadness and joy.
Safety and pain.1

Truth made of lies.

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at least I think so.

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  • Kevan gold member
    January 14
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    So very very true.
    But it's worth it. It's always worth it.
    If it's true love.


  • beezy92
    December 24, 2008
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    I loved this! Especially the last line. It's beautiful and so true (:


  • lavanya
    December 23, 2008

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    beautiful ...very deep...and really i myself love the the line"truth made by lies"...may god this is so very heavy and deep. good job dear...good luck.


  • roars-in-public
    December 12, 2008

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    So simple ad deep...
    I'm not a fan of poetry, but this is short enough to hold me, and has the added bonus of giving me lots to think about. Awesome.


  • LoneWriter
    December 10, 2008
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    The last line I found was the most powerful I believe. Great Job!
    ~Lone

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