She only 18 the day I saw her. So young, inicent and full of life. I asked her to come to prom with me, she agreed. We met at my place around 5:00 p.m. so that I could take her to dinner before we left.1
But we never made it prom and we never went to dinner. We ended up in a ditch somewhere outside of Halifax. When I opened my eyes, I saw her, only she was different, bloody and bruised. I felt her neck...no pulse. I felt her chest...no breaths. I closed my eyes and as a tear feel down my cheek.2
The next thing I remember is seeing her. Her long hair had turned white and she had her wings. She was sitting on a cloud, in hevan with god. She looked at me with her big blue eyes and said:3
"I am your gaurdin angel now and I will protect you from harm. Where ever you are and what ever you do, just remember I am in hevan watching over you."4
I woke up in a hospital bed, surrounded by friends and family, and some how I knew, that everything was going to be alright.
A contest entry
- picture prompt by trekkergirl.
100 points, ended December 12, 2008, 4 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Whadda ya Think....
Comments
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So sad in the beginning. Yet ended so well with the dead girl being a guardian angel. I do however think that this needs to have more feeling in it. I didn't feel his sadness at the loss of the girl. Or his relief of being the one to survive. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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Very nice Amee.
Sad though, but beautifully written. And though I checked the picture after I read the story, that girl looks like the one I was picturing.
Good job, and I'm glad you're finally back on Storywrite! Keep it up hun!
xoxox.
Kevan. <3
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