All I could focus on was Fenton’s bald head. A cruel joke that stripped away what was left of his dignity; his silky brown mullet. Watching in stunned silence as the guard attached the electrodes to his newly shaved scalp. I knew it was necessary so they would make direct contact with his skull; but it left him looking naked and vulnerable.
Author notes
"Kidnap the Sandy Claws." Not a darn clue where this is from sorry. Lonesome Dove
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Ooh, very good. I really have no idea what's going on here but I'm sure if there's continuation that would become evident This was very well-written, I do hope there's more to the story Great job and thanks for entering!
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