"When I look into your eyes1
I can see a love restrained2
But darlin' when I hold you3
Don't you know I feel the same4
'Cause nothin' lasts forever5
And we both know hearts can change6
And it's hard to hold a candle7
In the cold November rain"8
I kept wondering if it was the best that we split. Things just didn't seem the same with him, was it best that we moved on? The pain will be over soon, but it's just sticking with me at the moment. I really wish it wasn't. How come love always has to be so painful? Falling in and out was never my thing.9
"We've been through this such a long long time10
Just tryin' to kill the pain11
But lovers always come and lovers always go12
An no one's really sure who's lettin' go today13
Walking away"14
Is moving on just a cliche? Can it actually happen? I've seen this too many times, what will the next man I see think of me? Will I fall in love again? Love is a funny thing, it just loses it's humor most of the time.15
"If we could take the time16
to lay it on the line17
I could rest my head18
Just knowin' that you were mine19
All mine20
So if you want to love me21
then darlin' don't refrain22
Or I'll just end up walkin'23
In the cold November rain24
Do you need some time...on your own25
Do you need some time...all alone26
Everybody needs some time...27
on their own28
Don't you know you need some time...all alone"29
I guess I can live my life just knowing you were with me. I'm willing to love you back if you love me, but don't be too late. I know how it'll end and it's not pretty. Maybe we need some time away from each other. This might not be the end yet.30
"I know it's hard to keep an open heart31
When even friends seem out to harm you32
But if you could heal a broken heart33
Wouldn't time be out to charm you34
Sometimes I need some time...on my35
own36
Sometimes I need some time...all alone37
Everybody needs some time...38
on their own39
Don't you know you need some time...all alone"40
Are you really willing to leave me? Will you regret it the next day? Know this, I'll always be here. You don't have to love me like you once did, but I think I always will.41
"And when your fears subside42
And shadows still remain43
I know that you can love me44
When there's no one left to blame45
So never mind the darkness46
We still can find a way47
'Cause nothin' lasts forever48
Even cold November rain"49
I guess it's true, nothing does last forever. I've lived with that before, I can live with it now. Maybe there's something blocking our love? Should I just go on?50
"Don't ya think that you need somebody51
Don't ya think that you need someone52
Everybody needs somebody53
You're not the only one54
You're not the only one"55
We all need someone, and if you don't need me, find somebody you need to love. A life without love is nothing at all, and I think we know that. Starting now we should go out and move on, and let's just remember the times we had. That's all that we need.56
Song: November Rain57
Artist: Guns N Roses58
Author notes
Guns n Roses are my favorite band; now and forever!!
A contest entry
- For Music Lovers... by Misguided Mess..
275 points, ended December 12, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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Intriguing.
I can totally relate to this, and it was beatifully written.
No grammatical errors as far as I can see...(but i'm really bad at noticing those, lol)
And a nice even flow. Nice choice of song too.
I wish you remembered to ask about an artist that wasn't on my list though. You're lucky I know Guns N' Roses, otherwise this might not have counted as an entry.
Good Luck and thank you for entering! -
I love guns`n roses....and november rain, though my favorite is don`t cry
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it's a very pretty song


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great
this is really amazing -
Very good, keep up the great work!
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Dammit that explains why Axel Rose was singin in my ear the entire time I was reading this...
Very well done.

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