To my favorite.....

1

I can only hope that this never find you2

Where ever you currently be3

cause the truth hurts and it's a bitch4

to those who deny what they've done5

I didn't believe it when I was first told either6

It just couldn't be true7

how could my savior be a beast8

how could you be a killer9

a murderer...10

but shit happens I guess11

Thank the upstairs for surviving12

it was time of lies13

when you two first met14

it was just for fun15

and no one in the world would have to know16

It was a quick, sadistic compromise17

for you18

It was the sweetness of her innocence seep down her thighs19

Betcha that all you though about , right?20

Couldn't wait to get her undress21

But just like any circumstance22

three little words can change your life23

four can kill you24

and you did add her into the equation 25

it was just about you26

it was your hubris27

her mistake28

and her fault.......29

but it was your fist30

and your knee.....and those size 13 31

tightly lace combat boots32

into her fucking left side33

right side34

and back side35

but why? because of a defenseless little baby?36

barely three months alive?37

Yet....despite everything you did to her....38

I survived.39

Just barely, though40

And i never quite under stood 41

why she was so protective over me42

or why you hated me so much.43

But I do now.44

And i know that every day i grow45

you're wishing you had done the job right46

wishing for a second chance to 47

knock my mom unconscious 48

to beat her into submission49

cause she refused to get an abortion50

It's a good thing you were away when my sister was born51

but i guess my baby brother wasn't so lucky52

yet now today you've got seven all together53

plus who knows how many miscarriages/abortions you've induced54

but that doesn't matter 55

All that matters is that I know56

You may have honors from this war57

And clean cut for all to see58

but you'll always be my favorite killer.

Author notes

another rant on my pops. My favorite number is 316 because that's what time i was born and the room number my mom was in.

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  • Gagiikwe
    January 19
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    Realistic and heavy

    A great framework. Could be fleshed out even more fully.

    beginning: 3, language: 2, plot: 1, ending: 3, characters: 1.


  • Forgotten Anomaly
    December 8, 2008

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    Geez... this is deep, really deep. I wish it were the only case of this happening that I know of but its not, sadly, I'm short a few aunts and uncles...

    I hope your mom got out of there before you and your sister were old enough to remember any of it, or most of it. I'm seriously depressed now.

    I wasn't really looking for poems in this contest but I'll let it slide, I love this peice too much to DQ it. In fact your a finalist.

    Thank you for entering

    Phoenix


  • ice wolf Greeters member
    December 8, 2008

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    This is deep. It made me feel sick in my stomach and want to kill the sadistic SoB that did this. Excellent and well-written.. I only hope that nothing like this happns again. The sad thing is, it's how society is turning out I'm lucky to be with a guy that would support me were I able to have a kid. I hope that you are luckier than your mom was in finding a mate.