Yesterdays Girl

Thrown away1

I am useless2

replaced3

For I am yesterdays girl.4

No gentle touches5

no loving caresses6

no strong arms to hold me.7

No loving words8

to tell me I am wanted9

needed10

loved.11

For I am discarded12

another has taken my place.13

I am yesterdays girl14

and as such15

I am nothing.16

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  • x-VisionaryMinor-3
    January 11
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    Ouch

    I can feel the sense of rejection coming from the poem...

    Nicely done


  • Artificial.Smiles. gold member
    December 11, 2008
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    ;[ this was a really good poem. I liked it a lot!

    Good Luck in my Contest!