I Am

I am Hot For Teacher and Lost in Wonderland.1

I Wonder about Wonderland and all it has to hold.2

I Hear a voice yelling, "Off with her head!"3

I See card soldiers and solitary grins.4

I Want to go the Wonderland where I'm sure to find the girl of my dreams.5

I am Hot For Teacher and Lost in Wonderland.6

I Pretend to be far away, In Wonderland, with the girl of my dreams.7

I Feel free as a bird in the woods and confined as a bird in a cage8

I Touch the Bread and Butter flies, and I touch my cat and my Pencil9

I Worry that I'll never find Wonderland and Never be with the girl of my dreams.10

I Cry over spilled milk and I Cry over broken dreams11

I am Hot For Teacher and Lost in Wonderland.12

I Understand that times are hard, that life's not fair, that impossible exists.13

I Say i'm going to wonderland and promise to make it someday.14

I Dream of a place where cards walk and Hatter's drink tea.15

I Try very hard to stay in this world, but Wonderland is just so much better.16

I Hope wonderland does exist.17

I am Hot For Teacher and Lost in Wonderland.

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  • Atticus Unanimous
    December 8, 2008

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    I love this one. It's a very interesting piece. I love how you incorporated Alice and Wonderland and all its mysteries to your own contemplations that may or may not be as literal as they seem. It sticks with me. Maybe because I love Alice and I love the curiousities within it. You have done a good job here. The only thing I found that I think is a typo considering you did this everywhere else is in line 14. You need to capitalize "i'm."

    Great job!