Duffle Bag

I want you to imagine walking along a bridge. And you come across a duffel bag sitting next to the edge. You open it hoping to find an address so the owner can find it. Inside there is a shopping list from an store that reads the following:1

1 duffel bag, 2

Rope, 3

A two-person tent,4

Bridges of the world, 5

Three days supply of water, 6

Hiking boots, 7

2 pairs of binoculars,8

Dehydrated veggies and noodles, 9

Cooking equipment, 10

Survival Guide 101, 11

Flint stick,12

How to use a flint stick, 13

Flashlight,14

DDD batteries,15

Five people you meet in heaven by Mitch Album,16

The Pact by Jodi Picoult,17

Perfect knot: Beginners,18

Empty Prozac bottle,19

10 things to do before you die Vol. 1, 20

Vol. 2, 21

Stationary, 22

Dear mom Draft one23

Draft two,24

Dear Dad draft one,25

Draft two,26

Stamps, 27

Envelopes, 28

How to write an affective goodbye letter,29

Pens,30

Finding God in Death by Richard Greer, 31

One way bus ticket bus tickets, 32

Camera, 33

CD. Player, 34

Soothing Sounds of the Beach CD, 35

Sleeping bag.36

You replace everything into the bag and ignore the ids that lay at the bottom. You climb 37

back into your car make a u-turn and forget you ever came across it.38

Author notes

Just a dream I had awhile ago.

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  • emosauresgay
    January 7
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    gay

    taht is one fuck uop dream honestly who would dream something like that holly shit

    beginning: 1, language: 1, plot: 1, ending: 1, dialog: 1, characters: 1.


    • InksterMoxy
      January 9
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      it's not my dream exactly. I elaborated on my dream to give it depth but that's the gist of it. And yeah I do often dream fucked up shit. Idk y, I just do. I think Psych 101 would say that it comes from "unresolved feelings of tragedy in my past". Anyway that's it. hope that helps


  • Lithron
    December 6, 2008
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    Creepy. Good, but very creepy. Keep up the good work!