Relationships

A Relationships is like....of all kinds...are like sand1

held in your hand,Held loosely,with an open hand,the sand2

remains where it is.The minute you close your hand and3

squeeze tightly to hold on,the sand trickles4

through your fingers.You may hold on to some of it,5

but most will be spilled.A relationships is like that.Held6

loosely,with respect and freedom for the other person,it7

is likely to remain intact.but hold too tightly,too8

possessively,and the relationship slips away and is lost.

this is my 1st poem hope you guys like it.....

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  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    February 13

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    I like it but its not that original. I see things like this on myspace bumper stickers way 2 often. I do like it tho. Its a good life lesson.

  • terminal
    December 4, 2008
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    Dude...That is SO off lol