Song for MJ

(Chorus) What if i were a goody two shoes1

and did everything i was 'sposed to do2

i'd be a perfect little girl3

and cute as can be4

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How could i be a goody two shoes6

when i've never ever found a kind word to use7

could never be a teacher's pet cause8

that just aint me9

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Waking down the hall who do i see11

little Mary Jane, sweet sixteen12

always hated girls like her 13

so tripped her down the steps and stole her purse14

But even not that is the worse that i could do-oo-oo15

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(chorus) What if i were a goody two shoes17

and did everything i was 'sposed to do18

i'd be a perfect little girl19

and cute as can be20

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How could i be a goody two shoes22

when I've never ever found a kind word to use23

could never be a teacher's pet cause24

that just aint me25

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Good girls settle things by proving their right27

Bad girls settle shit by winning a fight28

Rolling in the bruised knees elbows scraped29

don't need an ace bandage all I need is duck tape30

Which everybody knows scores better than Scoody-doo-oo31

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What if i were a goody two shoes33

and did everything i was 'sposed to do34

I'd be a perfect little girl35

and cute as can be36

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How could i be a goody two shoes38

when I've never ever found a kind word to use39

could never be a teacher's pet cause40

that just aint me41

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bridge:43

Who do you think would win 44

when car pulls out in front of you?45

Hell even orphan Annie would know better46

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When the flunky sales men raise the price48

whatchu gonna do-oo-oo49

And thinks a good feel up50

will settle your attitude---Hey watch your hands!----51

good girls will talk about needing a man52

my bad girls got what they need 53

in the palm of their hand54


Uh!55

Guitar/Bass Solo 56

What if i were a goody two shoes57

and did everything i was 'sposed to do58

I'd be a perfect little girl59

and cute as can be60


How could i be a goody two shoes61

when I've never ever found a kind word to use62

could never be a teacher's pet cause63

that just aint me64


I'll 65

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Never 67

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Be69

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A71

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Per-fect73

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Lit-tle75

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Girl77

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Cause 79

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I 81

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Know 83

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That85

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Us87

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Bad 89

girls 90

rule91

WORLD!

Author notes

So I wrote this a while ago. I just was pissed at my mom telling me to be a lady. My tomboys understand me. But recently it crossed my mind because a certain female irritates me. And in light of my detestation of her I dedicate this song (no her name's not Mary Jane. those are very comfortable preppy shoes ). Naw, i was just expressing my self. I actually want to put this into a real song, I just have to get a couple of my band geek buds together again. We had a concert at Cicero's during the summer, not bad. Anyway. tell me what you think. I want ideas, critique, goods, bads, and uglies ( if you're familiar with the talk show). Hit me! (not literally of course, i wasn't joking about the fighting thing )

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  • DeathByChocolate
    April 4

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    Cool song! I like it a lot! Hmmm, maybe a drum solo?

    Okay, even though I like this a lot, its a bit under the 400 word limit. I'm sorry, but I will have to DQ you. It would be awesome if you entered something else!


  • trekkergirl
    December 10, 2008

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    I liked the whole thing except the very ending... the language is what I didn't like there. The rest of the poem was fine. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • Sgs
    December 7, 2008

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    Love it! I am not necessarily a tomboy, but my girlfriend is! These lines totally rock:
    "Good girls settle things by proving their right
    Bad girls settle shit by winning a fight."
    I could definitely see a band jamming this one out. Great job!


  • Star-Vomit
    December 5, 2008
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    That was great!XD

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