Accidents.

It was a rainy day. The blue droplets came down like bricks, blinding everyone. He shouldnt blame himself, it wasnt really his fault. It was an accidant. And like many accidents, they hurt a lot for everyone, not just the victim. 1

This is the accidental story. The story of me.2

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14. be inspired by the rain

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  • Seshat Kitty
    December 6, 2008

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    I'm sorry but I did say in the rules that the story has to be over 300 words.
    Nice story but I'm afraid it's not eligible to win anything, unless of course you continue with it.
    Sorry

  • Leif
    December 4, 2008

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    In sentence four, your spelled "accident" "accidant". I bet it was an accidental mistake.

    Good luck in her cotnest... I like the message in the story.