Untitled (Intro)

Never had she thought she would do this.Taking the knife she made her first cut.It wasn't deep but then she felt she needed to bleed.So this time she broke a razor blade off of a shaver and drew it across her arm.Slowly the invisble line in her arm turns red and begins to drip heavily with blood. she takes a white washcloth and tries to stop the bleeding. As the blood seeps through the cloth it turns black!Is she seeing things or is this really happining? So maybe she is evil, her blood has now turned black. Is it because of him? The hate she feels for him?Now her feel to bleed increases. She takes the razor against her arm several more times.Teh she has flash Backs!Hella many too!Then the whole world seems to cave in!1

Should We Start From The Begining?2

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This is the beginging/ending of the story i am starting to write!!

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  • audiothing13
    August 2, 2005
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    Tis frigging rocks, keep it going.

  • love me always
    May 4, 2005
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    ooooooooookkkkkkkkk rock on!!!!!!! blessed b..sha


  • April 30, 2005
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    good. it draws me in like a fly to a light!