Like man, vampires have a creator. To help you understand a little better I will tell you how the first vampire came to be. The first and only wife of the god Gothmore was Meda. She was made by him because no other goddess would couple with him, for he was a ugly hateful brute of a god.1
Gothmore wanted a mate so badly, after he tried coupling with female animals and found it to be unsatisfying,Gothmore stole the book of creation from his brother Merdock and Begin to make his own mate. But there was a problem, in his hast to make his mate Gothmore took many short cuts, and used the castoffs of unwanted creations. He gave her no god like qualities and named her Meda. 2
Once he was done with his opus,he felt that she was lowly and not beautiful like the other goddess. For Meda did not have there shiny gold spun hair, hers was black as night. Her eyes were not a shimmering sky blue but dark as a deep black well. And her skin was not a warm sun-kissed tan, but white and cold as marble. So Gothmore treated her poorly and cared not for her well being.3
On a particular day Gothmore decide that he would have his way with Meda, and for the first time she told him no. Meda Told him she had no love for him and could see how he clearly had no love for her wished to go her own way. Gothmore became infuriated with Meda he created her for his pleasure and cared nothing for her needs, so he took her by force every night and locked her in a room. this went on for months,one day Gothmore went out. Before he left he let Meda out.4
Gothmore forgot to lock the key that opened the gate to earth, for that was Gothmores' job he was keeper of the keys.Keys that opened doors and gates to other worlds.Key in hand Meda set off for the world know as earth. Meda opened the gate with the key and walked down the dirt path. she followed the path till she arrived at a bridge that was carved from pink quartz, no water flowed under this bridge but stars that twinkled in a black inky darkness. 5
As she walked, Meda was transported to earth where for the first time she found peace. Once Gothmore returned home and discovered Meda gone he grew enrage, and looked into the well of seeing. In the well he saw Meda on earth being married a human. Gothmore went to earth and slew her human husband, then forced Meda to eat her husband, some part of the bad cast off that Gothmore put her together with came awake within her as her husbands warm blood slid down her throat. 6
Later that evening a traveler of Norse origin stopped by the cottage to trade wears, when he pushed on the half open door. He finds a pale dark haired woman bent over a man sucking the blood from his neck, the woman looks a lot like the Norse goddess of death to the man.He rans away and once in town tells the towns people that he saw the valdis, valr meaning the dead and dis meaning goddess. Over time the name has changed to what we now call the vampire.
Author notes
I took this from a story I had been working on.I made this up, but I did get a little inspiration from the whole Adam and lilith thing.
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There are a lot of grammatical errors in there, but this was a fantastic story. The story alone was enough to hold my attention. What an interesting origins story for the vampire...
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Thanks, I am glad you liked the story I know I have really bad grammer, and it looks like it may never improve.Btw your contest page cracked me up. Your a funny fucker.
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Wow! This was great!
I love your take on how vampires were created. Very good.
It was a little rushed toward the end but I still loved it.
Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Pretty good
and quite creative. I really liked this, though there were a few grammatical errors.
Anyway, best of luck in the contest, I can see I'll have a run for my money ^_^
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to help you understand -To help you understand
Meda Told him-Meda told him
Once he was done with his opus,he felt that she was lowly and not beautiful like the other goddess. For Meda did not have there shiny gold spun hair, hers was black as night. Her eyes were not a shimmering sky blue but dark as a deep black well. And her skin was not a warm sun-kissed tan, but white and cold as marble. So Gothmore treated her poorly for this-eh, he used castoffs and then blamed her for being different. one weird character
earth, For that was -earth, for that was
Gothmores job-Gothmores' job
LOL, she killed him with her own castoff qualities! Very evil twist.
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thanks for reading my story!!!
well maybe I confused you with my story or I confused myself,Gothmore killed Medas husband and made her eat him,which triggered something in the "bad" castoff parts that Gothmore made her with. But I think the story might sound better with Meda killing Gothmore also. Ya Gothmore made her and he was in such a hurry that he made her from the unwanted parts of other creations gone wrong.
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