Insomnia-pt. 30

A couple months went by and Alex, Jordan, Damien and I left straight from school and went to her OBGYN to have the baby checked on.  She told me that they would probably be able to tell the sex of the baby today too.  1

While Alex and Jordan are in the room, Damien and I sit out in the waiting room impatiently.  He drapes his arm around me and I rest my head on his shoulder.  My legs bounce up and down in anticipation and I chew on my nails.2

"'Rach, calm down it's not like she's going to be in there forever."  Damien tells me.3

"Well it damn well feels like it!"  I shoot back at him with a playful smile.  He smiles and shakes his head, "besides, I need to know what it is ok...I mean...this is like, my family!"  I add dramatically.4

As though on cue Alex and Jordan come out, I rush up to them, "what is it?"  I squeal excitedly.5

"It's a boy!"  Alex tells me.6

"Oh my gods!"  I shrill and jump up and down, hugging her.  I can't hold back the excitement, it's so stupefying.7

I put my hand on Alex's stomach, "hi there little nephew!"  I say happily.8

In the background I hear Damien mutter to Jordan, "holy hell she's gone bonkers."  9

I turn around and swat him in the arm, "shut up you."  I say.10

"Hey!  That's physical abuse!  I'm suing!"  Damien says, crossing his arms and pretending to pout.  I smile and swat him again.  "Hey!"  11

I lean into him and he puts his arms around me, "you love it."  I mutter.12

"Ok so we better think of some names huh?"  Jordan says as we leave.13

Alex nods and we all climb into the car, heading toward Alex and Jordan's house.  14

On our way back I feel so full of life, just so happy that Alex is ok and Jordan is ok and the baby is ok.  Everything around me is real and it's as though I were opening my eyes for the first time. 15

Author notes

ok this is short i know but this is all i can come up with...sorry...

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  • poetic freedom
    July 11, 2006
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    more! i need more!!


  • BlackBloodyRose
    October 11, 2005
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    amazing

    is it done ahhh it can't be done wahhh this was flippen amazing i cried laughed and cried ahhh

  • devils desire
    September 24, 2005
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    hey iv bin readin this an its like bloody amazin! lol get the next chapter out soon! xD i love it, an i cnt w8 to see wot happens! keep up the gr8 writin, its brill luv devils desire xxxx

  • NotMyShadeOfGray
    June 11, 2005
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    thanks, i'm glad you like it so much.

  • screamingwriter
    June 11, 2005
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    hey i read all the parts and i love this story *kick Ass*


  • illegalfairy
    May 1, 2005
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    oh this is soooo cool. It sounds just like me if my friend paige ever gets pregnant. well minus the me having a bf. but yeah great job can't wait for more.
    ~later~


  • BlooQKazoo
    April 30, 2005
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    this is so sweet! shes all happy and its so cool! lol i think ive become emotionally attatched to this one as well lmao but this is cool and although im cross coz its short, that can be overlooked coz its so amazing love you loads
    polly

  • spasticloser
    April 29, 2005
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    the last 3 chapters i read are great....i can't beivle she hit the tree! well you did in real life i came to read later....what makes those two chapters great was they came from real life...even tho it wasn't a great time in life it's still nice that was the inspiration.....as for this chapter...i'm so happy to see things going okay for a them....a boy...i can't wait to see the names keep up the great writing


  • MisJudged
    April 29, 2005
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    wow, this is awesome! i love this so much! im so glad you added more to your story~ well i gotta go
    Allie

  • crying-blood
    April 29, 2005
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    awwwwwwwwwwww migods!!! this is soooooooo cute!! its a boy!!! lols. its so happy! (for a change lol) but yeah, its awesome! please write more soon!
    love forever and always
    -mina-

  • Suicide Girl 169
    April 29, 2005
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    yaaaay!!! i love this. i told you about the little error you need to fix, but other than that this was a perfect part. i'll work on mine soon. love ya!
    ~Alex

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