The heavens open and an angel looks at the world 1
She spy's a demon causing trouble 2
With wings spread she heads to the earth to stop him 3
The demon sees her coming but dose not run 4
He is frozen by her beauty 5
The angel starts to speak and the demon smiles 6
Her sweet voice has him in aw 7
The angel Ask him what are you doing here? 8
With this the demon responds "I am doing what I am told" 9
The angel tells him that he do not have to be this way 10
And the demon just smiles and says he wants to change 11
There is something about her that has the demon wanting to make a move 12
The angel for some reason is starting to feel something inside her 13
Something that she has not felt before 14
The feeling of love growing , building inside her 15
For some reason the angel cant take her eyes off the demons 16
And she gets closer to him 17
The passion explods between them and they have a night of love making 18
With this they flea the night 19
Not wanting the passion they shard be known 20
Within the next few days the angel feels she is pregnant 21
She goes before God confessing all that has taken place 22
And ask if the demon could be saved to save there baby from having demon blood 23
He tell her he can save the demon but the baby will still be part demon 24
God calls forth the demon to come before him 25
And saves his soul so he can live in heaven 26
The demon and the angel send there baby into woman on earth 27
Not wanting him to grow up knowing of how he came to be 28
What all he has inside to keep him safe 29
He is born to a family of four growing as a normal human baby 30
Never to know his true form 31
His true power 32
or anything of his true parents33
Author notes
This is somthing I have been thinking about for a few days This is the starting story line to a video game I want to make
What did you think? Please comment!
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I like the synopsis alot. It won't quite work as a poem as you have it written down..but write the story. It sounds good. Keep it up. Daoine
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greatest
this poem made me feel the same way i did towards my ex-girlfriend, and that is pure and utter love. i loved every word of it like i loved every curve of her body, and how it looked when she wore those pretty little low cut jeans every time we would go to the movies to make out. she caught me making out with another girl though, at a different movie, and thing weren't quite the same anymore because she wouldn't talk to me and when ever i would write her poems she would yell at me and say things like "get a life! i dont even like you anymore!" but people say things when they are mad that they dont really mean sometimes. very good poem, it is very moving. -
I liked this alot, only thing, up top you said "dose" and i think you meant "does"...i thought this was a very good story, and showed a lot of heart and emotion....very very well written, glad to read something of urs again, it's been a while
Much love and respect to you my good friend
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A very different type of love story! (I guess its true that "opposites DO attract!" Sorry; I couldn't resist!
) You truly have a way of pulling your reader along; I just hate these have all been so short! Would love to see this story developed further!
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Great Job
Whoa! Now this I do like and at first I thought I inhaled second hand from someone smoking crack~
The picture was here and then was gone~ I had to give myself a sobriety test~ Maybe I drank something I should not have in my lemonade~ Passionate write and the pregnant part made my jaw drop~ See~ wink
Would love to read more~ Did not want it to end~ Keep them coming my dear~ Big hugs and much love~ Desire
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Wow that is a really cool write! Like a little biblical story gone wrong..really original. Nicely done! I liked how you made it seem like opposites attract.
~*~blessings~*~
~rora
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