Do you see that girl over there? The one that everyone stares at, and feels sorry for? Thats me. 1
All I can say is that, they don't even try to get to know the real me. 2
All they see is the outside of me. I look in the mirror, and stare at 3
what they see. The outside of me.4
As I stare, I see a girl that is taller then the rest of the girls in 5
her class. She has stringy red hair, that goes down to her pointy 6
shoulder blades. Shes skinny and underweight. 7
Some people think that her parents don't care about her, but thats not 8
true. She just doesn't like eating. And she isn't anorexic, her hunger 9
just isn't there, it never was. 10
I just don't understand why they all treat me different. I use to fit 11
in, but that was then, and this is now. 12
And this is my story.13
Author notes
This story obviously isn't about me, and it isn't about anyone else i know. I just felt the urge to write a story and this is what came out! I hope you like it, and there will be MANY more additons!
What did you think? Please comment!
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I LOVE this story! I stare at the outside of me and wonder
what's so special or if people will like me because of what they see
and other's say. That bothers me. Plus, I'm not bg on eating lots
of food... evryone call me Birdy!! I like this story alot though.
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interesting story
Ok sweetie, let me help you with your writing first, in your first line you forgot the word "one" so it reads that "every stares at." Also, I think that you should make your i's capitals. Then it would look better written because some folks are picky about those things. Now, after those couple of typos.. this is very good. I cannot believe how much emotion you have got in your words. This reads as if you are really having those feelings and that this is you. So, you are very good at getting into character and stepping into another's shoes to tell a story. I think that this is very interesting and will make a good story. I look forward to reading more about her. God Bless and much love, Mom
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I love it hanny. It's an awesome story. I can't wait to read the rest!!!
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WOW... This is an awesome story Hannah... You are doing a great job!!! Good luck on developing this further!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
yeah, i know how it is..! so many people in high school r juged by there classmates in high school people are so cruel!!
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