It had been ages since I had seen him, last time I had we were just kids... he was throwing dirt at me and I just about ready to deack him one in the face, something most boys did not expect from girls, but my mum had always told me I was different and that I would have to find a man that could endure it and love it, and looking at this young man in front of me now, brown curly locks of sexiness for hair, gorgeus green eyes and a strong frame, I could seriously eat him like chocolate, but that would be vile... and I was looking for more of a mundane relationship. I was looking for... Dear lands look at that ass!
Author notes
This is for a contest...
"kidnap the sandy claws." and no I have no idea what that is on.
DeathRibbon
A contest entry
- Starting Paragraphs by LiveLoveJabberwocky.
175 points, ended December 25, 2008, 26 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
For a contest... comment please
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This is priceless:
"I could seriously eat him like chocolate, but that would be vile... and I was looking for more of a mundane relationship. I was looking for... Dear lands look at that ass!"
LOL, great job!
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Haha thanks mate, thanks alot, aye when I saw the contest I have to say.... I jumped at it lol
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That was a really long sentence! LOL
But moving on... I really liked the storyline of this. I would definitely read more of this if it exists. Great job, thanks for entering!
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Haha, yeah there is no more and you said paragraph... and this is indeed a paragraph lol
Thanks for readin!
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kidnap the sandy claws is off the nightmare before christmas...I liked this!!
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That could be why I didn't know seeing how I have never done christmas before lol
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aw thats sad..actually i never had a thing for the whole family christmas thing...i think i liked this because im a tomboy and this guy did throw stones at me cause of it, and me being me could not resist the urge the beat the crap outta him..hehe..i got kicked outta school for 2 days for doing that lol.5 years later he is like wow............hes kinda my best friend now and well i dont think he knows...
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Ah... well then.. thats some explenation lol
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