Afternoon Forrest

A gentle breeze blows through the pines, a soft brushing sound, as their needles hit one another. Soft thuds against the ground as my feet carry me to another part of the forest. Song birds sing their songs happily while they flutter about. The soft rushing of a nearby brook reaches my ears. Joining in the melody of song birds and wind.1

The light filters down through the trees and spots of light hit the mossy forest floor. Gentle greens and browns, darker shades of colors when they are hidden in shadow. All sorts of foliage grows here, summer flowers, ferns, and even small little mushrooms growing under the shade of a tree or underneath a fallen log.2

The sun warmly greets me as I step into a clearing, the last of the trees brushes against my arm, leaving faint red lines, Long strands of grass brush against my knees, tickling and leaving goose bumps. Little rocks move and shift beneath each of my steps.3

Intermingling with each other making one scent that appeals. Individually I can sort them each a distinct and individual smell. The calming scent of pine, thee slight earthy smell of a forest, the breeze carries a trace of summer flowers, them there is the almost potent smell of skunk, horrible on its own but with the others, it becomes almost enjoyable.4

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  • Araina
    April 29, 2005
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    This was wonderfully descriptive; vivid enough that I could see it all in my mind as I read it. I love forests, they are so relaxing and peaceful, and you captured that perfectly. Great job on this.

  • MentranBareMelodium
    April 29, 2005
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    wonderful

    this grows from underneath the undertow sproutting through moments of life and the shatter of concepts living in nature, i hope to hold a warmth for years to come i hope to bare this burden the plants of this earth have loaned for movements from the numb and most certainly you are the one. i thought that this was very innocent and beautiful write, thank you for sharing, and i will be waiting to hear some more of your scripts!
    -nai