White, fluffy clouds glide
peacefully through our skies everyday,
just waiting to accumulate enough
water to shower the ground below.
Coming in all shapes, sizes and colors;
making them all incredibly unique.1
Enormous, grey and foreboding clouds
may fill the skies one day,
while slender, white slouds may
take their place the next.
Cloud-watching: peaceful and relaxing,
perfect for when you just want to get away.2
Clouds can be good or bad,
depending on your perspective.
Will that cloud floating soundlessly across the sky
be a mighty storm in the making,
or a useful shade from the sun?
Author notes
This was originally paragraph that I wrote for my teacher, but I changed it so it was more like a poem. A contest entry.
A contest entry
- poetry by trekkergirl.
175 points, ended December 10, 2008, 93 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Gosh, something tells me that I have heard this poem before.. I am not sure.. possibly in L.A class! Except you made yours all fancy and edited... too bad mr. lanigan didn't see this version!
P.S I got the host and thge twilight box set for christmas and... right after I read the tale of despereaux, we went to see the movie (which is EXCELLENT!) -
this is interesting I like the question about the clouds... whether it be shade or a storm in the making. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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