Rio's Dilemma Intro

Rio walked down the sidewalk wringing his hands. He didn't even like anyone, how was he going to find someone to marry in four days. And what would happen if he didn't?

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kidnap the sandy claws, and it is from nightmare before christmas

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  • LiveLoveJabberwocky
    December 1, 2008

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    Ooh, very good. You got the idea of the contest just right. You have me wondering what will happen next, and I hope there's more! It was a very good start, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for entering!


  • donuts-and-music
    November 30, 2008
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