Intro to Sunset

I walked down the shore of the beach slowly thinking about the events of today. How could this happen? How, out of everyone, could Josh have been picked. Tears began to form in the corners of my eyes and threated to pour out. I blinked, desperately tried to keep from crying, but my vision blurred and tears ran down my cheeks anyway, smearing my makeup.11

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kidnap the sandy claws, from nightmare before christmas

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  • LiveLoveJabberwocky
    December 1, 2008

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    I've read it already of course, but it was still good The story was awesome too. Great paragraph.