A Cereal Killers Whish List Item # 11
(Please read authors notes before reading poem)2
On his belly,3
He crawls4
Creeping slowly5
Through the ferns6
On the Forrest floor.7
Knife in his mouth8
And rage in his heart9
He reaches the perimeter10
Of the Boy Scout Camp.11
The Bonn fire12
That lit his way13
Now burnt down14
To a pile15
Of smoldering embers.16
Standing up17
The dim light before him18
Cast a shadow19
Of a Demonic Prince20
About to be baptized21
In the blood22
Of his tormentors.23
He counts the tents24
Nine small25
And one large26
Eighteen boys27
And the Scout Master.28
The condemned souls29
Of Troop Twenty-two.30
Silently he moves31
From tent to tent32
Killing only one in each.33
Cupping his hand34
Over nose and mouth35
The blade36
Slips into37
The back of their skulls38
Severing brain-stem from spine.39
A merciful death40
But these nine41
Were nice to him.42
He had a more befitting end43
For the other nine.44
How delicious the fear45
He soon would taste.46
With plastic zip ties47
He binds each one48
To the aluminum frame49
Of their cots50
And duct tapes51
Each of their mouths.52
Ah fear53
Anticipation over54
The sweet smell55
Tickles the taste buds.56
It tastes like more.57
Eyes wide58
And screaming59
For their duct taped mouths60
That can't!61
Each tent he leaves62
Reeks of fear63
And the sweet smell 64
Of blood.65
Finally66
The big tent67
The Scout Master68
The brass ring69
For the ring leader70
Of the other nine71
Who ridiculed72
And humiliated73
A boy of74
Fragile feelings.75
No piercing76
No black77
To be worn78
No Goth wanted79
Or needed80
In this81
Lily white clan82
Of do-gooder bullies!83
Go back to the freaks84
And the cellar dwellers85
You came from.86
Misfits87
Aren't welcome here!88
The big tent89
Looms before him.90
Stealthily91
He enters the tent92
Carrying a big stone93
From the fire ring.94
Still hot95
And burning his hand.96
He doesn't let go97
The tactile sensation98
Of physical pain99
Feels good100
But can't over shadow101
The pain in his heart.102
It only clarifies his vision103
Of baptism by fire.104
Standing over the big man105
In the big tent106
Rock held high107
Over the sleeping mans head108
He yells109
Hey you fucking scumbag!110
Eyes open111
And the rock drops.112
Not enough to kill him.113
He doesn't get off114
That easy!115
With his mouth116
Duct taped117
He makes sure118
The Scout Master's eyes119
Recognize him120
Before duct taping121
Them shut.122
Ah sensory deprivation123
Really heightens the fear!124
The Demonic Prince125
Is awakened126
He smells fear127
The Scout Master128
Is ripe with it!129
Leaving the big tent130
He gets to work131
Dragging all the ones132
That were nice to him133
out of their tent's134
And ties them standing135
Against the trees136
facing the fire137
So they can watch138
The festival of blood139
And the baptism by fire 140
Through the lifeless eyes141
Of unfortunate innocence.142
First stage of the play set143
He frolics through the forest144
Gathering enough wood145
For a Bonn fire.146
The sweet smell147
Of blood and fear148
Drifts through the forest149
Here in Yellowstone Park150
And is picked up by the wolves.151
Gray is their coat152
And black is their heart.153
Creatures of the night154
Undeniably bound155
To the Demon Prince.156
He bids them157
Wait158
Not yet159
But soon!160
The full Moon161
Lights his way162
To the dying embers163
Of the camp fire.164
The wolves balefully howl165
At the Moon166
And wait.167
As if gliding in168
On a low lying mist169
That blankets170
The forest floor171
He drops172
His load of wood173
By the fire.174
Back into the big tent175
For the coiled rope176
He'll need 177
To complete178
This Demonic179
Work of art.180
For fun181
He whispers182
In the mans ear183
Thank you so much184
For unlocking185
The evil186
That dwells within.187
Couldn't have happened188
Without you!189
Like steam190
Rising off a pot191
Of boiling water192
He could see the fear193
Rising up194
Off of him.195
Delicious!196
Wait Not yet197
But soon!198
His hand reaches down199
To the place200
On the mans head201
Where the rock hit.202
He gathers up203
The still drying blood.204
He paints his face205
Licking his hands clean206
When he's done.207
Now for the rope208
Up and over209
The closest branch210
To the fire.211
The wolves 212
Howl at the Moon213
Still keeping their distance.214
He rips the shirt215
From his body216
Leaving on217
His camouflage pants218
And shit kicker boots.219
One by one220
He drags the nine221
From their tents.222
As he removes each one223
He stops to paint himself224
With the blood of the innocent's 225
Nine Boy Scouts226
Bound and gaged227
Nine strokes 228
Of innocent blood229
Decorated his body.230
Nine cots faced the fire231
Upside down232
He removed the duct tape233
From their mouths234
So the Scout Master235
Could hear their screams.236
With the rope237
Tied to the cot238
One by One239
He lowered them240
Feet first241
Into the roaring Bonn fire.242
With each and every243
Blood curdling scream244
The sweet smell of fear245
Grew thicker.246
Each scream247
A paint stroke248
On the canvas249
Of his Masterpiece!250
He danced around251
Each and every one of them252
As he scorched their feet253
Beyond use! 254
Poetry in motion255
His beautiful256
Human effigies!257
Slowly258
He pulls them up259
Long before...260
They could pass out.261
He wanted them awake262
for the final act!263
He stood all nine264
Right side up265
And with a sinister laugh266
That only the blackest of hearts267
Could appreciate268
He advised them.269
Hold your breath270
And do not scream 271
Or you'll scorch your lungs272
And ruin my dream.273
One by one274
He lowered them275
Face first276
Into the fire.277
Just a few seconds278
Enough to make them blind279
Though no one would accuse him280
Of being over kind!281
He laid them down282
And cut them free283
As the innocents mocked them284
Tied to their trees.285
And they stumbled blindly286
On their hands and their knees.287
With the final act288
Nearing its end289
the Demonic Prince290
Dragged out their best friend.291
The Scout Master you see292
Had his eyes on me293
He really wanted to be294
My very best friend295
But my ass would not part296
And my knees would bend297
He already had nine298
But he wanted ten299
This coward did to boys300
What he couldn't do to men!301
In the middle of nine boys302
All writhing in pain303
He placed the Scout Master304
Who was nearly insane.305
Cutting all the tend-ants306
In his arms and his legs307
And tearing the clothes 308
From his body309
Cutting the bonds310
That held him to the cot311
He leaves him312
With the motor functions313
Of a newborn.314
Tearing off the duct tape315
Recognition shows in his eyes316
he looks down and says317
Thank you for awakening318
The darkness inside.319
Behold your creation320
I am the Demonic Prince321
The son of Satan!322
Before you die323
I will give you324
What you wanted325
So badly in life326
And hold your manhood327
In my loving arms.328
The Demonic Prince smiles329
As he reaches down with his knife330
And cuts off the scum bags penis331
And throws it in the fire.332
Blood flowing out333
With every beat of his heart334
Satan's Prince335
Pulls from the fire336
A burning stick337
And cauterizes the wound.338
Can't have you dying 339
Just yet340
My children341
Like their food342
Alive!343
The Demonic Prince344
Howled at the Moon345
It's dinner time346
My little Demons.347
And as he danced 348
Out of the camp site349
The wolves pranced in!350
He danced down the path351
To the rhythm352
Of the screams and the howls.353
He danced until the sound354
Faded into the distance355
At the end of the path.356
He climbs into his mothers357
Ford explorer358
And pulls a note pad359
Off the passenger seat.360
At the top of the first page361
Is a title "Revenge".362
He picks up a pen363
And crosses off364
The first item on the list365
And looks at the next item366
And laughs.367
The sinister laugh368
That only the blackest of hearts369
Could appreciate.370
The next item on the list371
How could I forget372
My High School foot ball team!373
But that's a story374
For another time375
Boys and girls376
So until we meet again377
Goodnight! 378
(Please read authors notes before reading poem)2
On his belly,3
He crawls4
Creeping slowly5
Through the ferns6
On the Forrest floor.7
Knife in his mouth8
And rage in his heart9
He reaches the perimeter10
Of the Boy Scout Camp.11
The Bonn fire12
That lit his way13
Now burnt down14
To a pile15
Of smoldering embers.16
Standing up17
The dim light before him18
Cast a shadow19
Of a Demonic Prince20
About to be baptized21
In the blood22
Of his tormentors.23
He counts the tents24
Nine small25
And one large26
Eighteen boys27
And the Scout Master.28
The condemned souls29
Of Troop Twenty-two.30
Silently he moves31
From tent to tent32
Killing only one in each.33
Cupping his hand34
Over nose and mouth35
The blade36
Slips into37
The back of their skulls38
Severing brain-stem from spine.39
A merciful death40
But these nine41
Were nice to him.42
He had a more befitting end43
For the other nine.44
How delicious the fear45
He soon would taste.46
With plastic zip ties47
He binds each one48
To the aluminum frame49
Of their cots50
And duct tapes51
Each of their mouths.52
Ah fear53
Anticipation over54
The sweet smell55
Tickles the taste buds.56
It tastes like more.57
Eyes wide58
And screaming59
For their duct taped mouths60
That can't!61
Each tent he leaves62
Reeks of fear63
And the sweet smell 64
Of blood.65
Finally66
The big tent67
The Scout Master68
The brass ring69
For the ring leader70
Of the other nine71
Who ridiculed72
And humiliated73
A boy of74
Fragile feelings.75
No piercing76
No black77
To be worn78
No Goth wanted79
Or needed80
In this81
Lily white clan82
Of do-gooder bullies!83
Go back to the freaks84
And the cellar dwellers85
You came from.86
Misfits87
Aren't welcome here!88
The big tent89
Looms before him.90
Stealthily91
He enters the tent92
Carrying a big stone93
From the fire ring.94
Still hot95
And burning his hand.96
He doesn't let go97
The tactile sensation98
Of physical pain99
Feels good100
But can't over shadow101
The pain in his heart.102
It only clarifies his vision103
Of baptism by fire.104
Standing over the big man105
In the big tent106
Rock held high107
Over the sleeping mans head108
He yells109
Hey you fucking scumbag!110
Eyes open111
And the rock drops.112
Not enough to kill him.113
He doesn't get off114
That easy!115
With his mouth116
Duct taped117
He makes sure118
The Scout Master's eyes119
Recognize him120
Before duct taping121
Them shut.122
Ah sensory deprivation123
Really heightens the fear!124
The Demonic Prince125
Is awakened126
He smells fear127
The Scout Master128
Is ripe with it!129
Leaving the big tent130
He gets to work131
Dragging all the ones132
That were nice to him133
out of their tent's134
And ties them standing135
Against the trees136
facing the fire137
So they can watch138
The festival of blood139
And the baptism by fire 140
Through the lifeless eyes141
Of unfortunate innocence.142
First stage of the play set143
He frolics through the forest144
Gathering enough wood145
For a Bonn fire.146
The sweet smell147
Of blood and fear148
Drifts through the forest149
Here in Yellowstone Park150
And is picked up by the wolves.151
Gray is their coat152
And black is their heart.153
Creatures of the night154
Undeniably bound155
To the Demon Prince.156
He bids them157
Wait158
Not yet159
But soon!160
The full Moon161
Lights his way162
To the dying embers163
Of the camp fire.164
The wolves balefully howl165
At the Moon166
And wait.167
As if gliding in168
On a low lying mist169
That blankets170
The forest floor171
He drops172
His load of wood173
By the fire.174
Back into the big tent175
For the coiled rope176
He'll need 177
To complete178
This Demonic179
Work of art.180
For fun181
He whispers182
In the mans ear183
Thank you so much184
For unlocking185
The evil186
That dwells within.187
Couldn't have happened188
Without you!189
Like steam190
Rising off a pot191
Of boiling water192
He could see the fear193
Rising up194
Off of him.195
Delicious!196
Wait Not yet197
But soon!198
His hand reaches down199
To the place200
On the mans head201
Where the rock hit.202
He gathers up203
The still drying blood.204
He paints his face205
Licking his hands clean206
When he's done.207
Now for the rope208
Up and over209
The closest branch210
To the fire.211
The wolves 212
Howl at the Moon213
Still keeping their distance.214
He rips the shirt215
From his body216
Leaving on217
His camouflage pants218
And shit kicker boots.219
One by one220
He drags the nine221
From their tents.222
As he removes each one223
He stops to paint himself224
With the blood of the innocent's 225
Nine Boy Scouts226
Bound and gaged227
Nine strokes 228
Of innocent blood229
Decorated his body.230
Nine cots faced the fire231
Upside down232
He removed the duct tape233
From their mouths234
So the Scout Master235
Could hear their screams.236
With the rope237
Tied to the cot238
One by One239
He lowered them240
Feet first241
Into the roaring Bonn fire.242
With each and every243
Blood curdling scream244
The sweet smell of fear245
Grew thicker.246
Each scream247
A paint stroke248
On the canvas249
Of his Masterpiece!250
He danced around251
Each and every one of them252
As he scorched their feet253
Beyond use! 254
Poetry in motion255
His beautiful256
Human effigies!257
Slowly258
He pulls them up259
Long before...260
They could pass out.261
He wanted them awake262
for the final act!263
He stood all nine264
Right side up265
And with a sinister laugh266
That only the blackest of hearts267
Could appreciate268
He advised them.269
Hold your breath270
And do not scream 271
Or you'll scorch your lungs272
And ruin my dream.273
One by one274
He lowered them275
Face first276
Into the fire.277
Just a few seconds278
Enough to make them blind279
Though no one would accuse him280
Of being over kind!281
He laid them down282
And cut them free283
As the innocents mocked them284
Tied to their trees.285
And they stumbled blindly286
On their hands and their knees.287
With the final act288
Nearing its end289
the Demonic Prince290
Dragged out their best friend.291
The Scout Master you see292
Had his eyes on me293
He really wanted to be294
My very best friend295
But my ass would not part296
And my knees would bend297
He already had nine298
But he wanted ten299
This coward did to boys300
What he couldn't do to men!301
In the middle of nine boys302
All writhing in pain303
He placed the Scout Master304
Who was nearly insane.305
Cutting all the tend-ants306
In his arms and his legs307
And tearing the clothes 308
From his body309
Cutting the bonds310
That held him to the cot311
He leaves him312
With the motor functions313
Of a newborn.314
Tearing off the duct tape315
Recognition shows in his eyes316
he looks down and says317
Thank you for awakening318
The darkness inside.319
Behold your creation320
I am the Demonic Prince321
The son of Satan!322
Before you die323
I will give you324
What you wanted325
So badly in life326
And hold your manhood327
In my loving arms.328
The Demonic Prince smiles329
As he reaches down with his knife330
And cuts off the scum bags penis331
And throws it in the fire.332
Blood flowing out333
With every beat of his heart334
Satan's Prince335
Pulls from the fire336
A burning stick337
And cauterizes the wound.338
Can't have you dying 339
Just yet340
My children341
Like their food342
Alive!343
The Demonic Prince344
Howled at the Moon345
It's dinner time346
My little Demons.347
And as he danced 348
Out of the camp site349
The wolves pranced in!350
He danced down the path351
To the rhythm352
Of the screams and the howls.353
He danced until the sound354
Faded into the distance355
At the end of the path.356
He climbs into his mothers357
Ford explorer358
And pulls a note pad359
Off the passenger seat.360
At the top of the first page361
Is a title "Revenge".362
He picks up a pen363
And crosses off364
The first item on the list365
And looks at the next item366
And laughs.367
The sinister laugh368
That only the blackest of hearts369
Could appreciate.370
The next item on the list371
How could I forget372
My High School foot ball team!373
But that's a story374
For another time375
Boys and girls376
So until we meet again377
Goodnight! 378
Author notes
This list chronicals a brother and sister's birth as...
"Cereal Revenge Killers"
Each item on this list is an epic horror short story written in Straight Verse, Rhyme and Prose. They are in order as they follow the Demonic Siblings go from one group killing to the next. When this list is finished, each item in the list will become a chapter in the first "Poetic Horror Novel" ever written!
A contest entry
- Myths And Legends by Peachy.
600 points, ended December 13, 2008, 16 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Not to my taste. But, of course, that is very personal.
It is, as you suggest, demonic if not just plain horrible. It is also as if the reader is invited to participate in the filth.
On a basic English note: apostrophes are sometimes used where they do not belong, ( out of their tent's) and, conversely, not used where they should be ( In the mans ear; He climbs into his mothers Ford explorer).
I suggest that Bonn fire should read bonfire each time used and that you mean gagged where you have gaged, as well as overshadow where you have over shadow. Do you mean tendons where you have tend-ants?
The whole is maintained with great impetus. -
Definitely creepy, I'll give you that.
Thank you for entering and good luck!

