My side of the story1
It is said that guns do not kill2
that only people do that deed.3
In this I do really agree.4
Without our technology5
where would we be6
somewhere lying helpless under a tree.7
Guns like all technology8
have their place9
we only need to grow morally10
along with technically11
so I speak my case.12
Guns do not kill13
its people who pick up the gun.14
It's people who pull the trigger.15
It's people who do the deed.16
So in this statement I agree17
that guns do not kill.18
It's people who do that deed. 19
Author notes
This is one of your prompts about the gun control issue... about guns not killing people... people do. Well we did a contest on AP about this and this is what I wrote on it. thought it fit.
In a list
A contest entry
- Need An Escape: An options contest. by colormeimpressed.
225 points, ended December 1, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Poetry!!(: by Artificial.Smiles..
180 points, ended January 2, 41 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like it. You got a little repetive, but overall I really liked it!
Good Luck in my Contest! -
Guns do not kill
its people who pick up the gun.
It's people who pull the trigger.
It's people who do the deed.
I so agree with you! This is absolute awesomeness! I really like it. It's true. It's so true.
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I like it, The rythme is a bit off, but it's still good. I really like it =]
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