In the morning dapple dew
sun now where the moon grew
birds now where stars flew
you wake - I love you1
with patch covering eye
I glance at the morning sky
I sit and wonder why
as new born kittens cry2
another day
has come our way
more poetic words to play
as we watch the blue jay3
spirit soars high above
passing the morning dove
then we see it's all just love4
colors from your face
lips of mine trace
this special place
of tatting lace5
covering6
hearts
Author notes
just some thoughts
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This is absoltuely beautiful. ^^ I love the rhyming in it, the cheeriness of it, and how it captures nature and love in one. Gorgeously written, thank you so much for sharing. And keep it up!
~Alix ♥ -
How about
In the morning dapple dew
sun now where moon light grew
birds now where stars once flew
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sounds a lot better than how I have it now..
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awww this piece is so sweet. this is the first thing ive read of yours and its very beautiful.
im glad i chose this i know your other stuff is just as great!
i really enjoyed reading this , its amazing. -
Very beautiful, sister.
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