Swimming in the depths of the sea1
The owner of the water world2
Smelling blood3
Sensing danger4
Solitary animals5
Living all alone6
Looking for food7
Sees one mysteriously dangling8
Get it before the others do9
Being rushed towards the mysterious light10
That no one know that much about11
They rarely live to tell the tale12
Struggling to get free13
Thrashing with its tail14
Its last moments will be lived in mystery15
Onlookers will never forget its last movements16
In desperate attempts to fight free17
Terror filled in its eyes18
What a horrible way to end ones life19
Captured, Caught.
Author notes
Please note you can find this in one of my other items added. I simply created a new page with it so that I could enter it in a contest.
A contest entry
- Maii Contest! by Rain4Life.
120 points, ended January 27, 22 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good
Descriptive, perfectly captures the emotions and point of view of the fish. Mysterious in itself at the start - it draws you in because you want to know what it's talking about. -
Very descriptive
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