out takes that I wanted to keep of storys

This one is from Good bye Edward I still wanted to keep it but I didn't really like it. 1

Some people say that if you think that you're crazy then you're probably not. Well they're wrong. I'm clearly crazy. Every girl I've seen reminds me of her. She could look nothing like her and I would still say something to bring her back into my life, but now, I think she could be a vampire. Now that's crazy. Yeah she "disappeared" but she could of fallen off a cliff, it's very likely. Tonight though it felt like it could of been her. She didn't look like what she did when she was human, she wore something she would of never worn, but some how she just seemed like...like. Like Bella. My wits are no longer about me.
Maybe Alice will leave me now. I'll be alone, I sometimes think that's all I really want. To be alone.2

Chapter Three:3


Irongic isn't, the old me was a clutz, yet the new me walks the most acliamed runways in the world. Magozines say I love being a model, but it's not true. The music to loud, the flash is to bright, and 4


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I'm calling it quits tonight look foward to a complete sentence tomorrow. 8

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Still trying to work on something.10

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Chapter Three:12

Some people say that if you think that you're crazy then you're probably not. Well they're wrong. I'm clearly crazy. Every girl I saw reminded me of her. She could look nothing like her and I would still say something to bring her back into my life, then one day I see this girl, and it was like I knew her. I've never meet her before, but I just kinda knew. We but now, she turns out to be Bella. Exepect she's guess what she's a vampire and I'm her manger. Now that's crazy. Yeah she "disappeared" but she could of fallen off a cliff, it's very likely. Tonight though it felt like it could of been her. She didn't look like what she did when she was human, she wore something she would of never worn, but some how she just seemed like...like. Like Bella. My wits are no longer about me.

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