Who Am I?

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I am the fear that stalks the land, the passion that fills every heart, the whispers that no one hears, the breath of the wind gently blowing through the trees, the one who unites light and dark, the one believes that evil and good are combined as one, the one with a deep sense of time passing by, but most of all, I am the one who is known by no one, but I am known by the stars.

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my fave color is black.

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  • KrisnysShadowDancer
    November 28, 2008

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    I like this, Evalyn. You don't know me and I'm new to the site but can I use this on my page? Messege me if I can. thx.


  • Kagamine Rin
    November 28, 2008

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    Hm, a bit of a run-on in my opinion. Simply do to the over usage of ",".

    I like how you used light and dark into your description, as well as a bit of passion.

    Good luck in my contest.

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    Rin