Glued to the wall, my flora faded and torn from countless people brushing past me, never able to join the vivid garden just outside my domain.
Author notes
I am an outsider, that people are used to being there, thus never really see. For the author's request, my favorite color is teal.
A contest entry
- One Sentence by Kagamine Rin.
210 points, ended December 7, 2008, 35 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this. is. absolutely. brilliant.
i hope you win
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Wow! That really makes me happy
Thank you so much for the very positive comment!
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This is very good, using the concept of a garden and walling.
And this also makes me think of newcomers who enter a domain in which they are either ignored or made fun of...
Good job.
Good luck in my contest.
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