A Simple Sentence from a Simple Me

I am the faded ground no one knows they step on, the roaring wind that passes yet no one hears, a passageway hidden by countless doors, a Thought that sits quietly just beyond comprehension, someone who reaches for the stars but gains the endless space behind them, touches every timeless moment but gets burned in return for the interest that sparks those moments, and finally, I am the one who knows not everything, but certainly more than a mere nothing.

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I'm not sure if this is what you were looking for, but I think I described myself pretty well in this sentence (even if it is very long ). If you want me to explain what I mean in this Very Long Gathering of Words (as I will call the statement above), comment and I will most certainly reply with what you are searching for.

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  • Kagamine Rin
    November 26, 2008

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    The. Best. Line. Ever.

    I love this entry! So long and very descriptive! Possibly a run-on with the over usage of ",", but very good. This is excellent.

    I wish you luck in mah contest! XD :3


    • Iris Doyle
      November 26, 2008
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      Thanks so much. I agree; it is a bit long . But thank you. Good luck judging!