Re-Action

I always hated those little fags!They think the are so smart with their computers and card games.They always make me look dumb, with their high grades and smart elic responses.The Teachers are always saying 1

'why cant you be more like Steven..or why can't you go to study groups, Nathaniel is having one tonight.' 2

Lol. Well the one thing I got on them is size.3

Imma make their lives a living hell...4

Anway, back to my story, me and my friends always hang out at the pool hall.We don't do well in school, but at least we can come here and have some fun.Sometimes we even sneak beer inside mountain Dew bottles. Well it was Friday night, and we had nothing to do. So we are shooting pool and having a good time ya know normal teen stuff. The Goths had the Movies, the skaters had the Colony Rock Theatre, and we had the pool hall.It was out place.Well outta nowhere in walks these two kids from school.One was that Nathaniel kid Mrs. Richards was telling me about and the other is a kid named Jonas. 5

Both of em, typical computer fags.Ya know tight pants, those gay little glasses, and the standard comb over. I hate that.Why cant they just be normal.What makes them so high and mighty.I see them and I just want to break their scrawny necks.Well I said to David, lets go beat the hell outta them, and he was like no man lets just mess with em.So we ran over while they were sitting their coats down, and we gave them wedgies, and dumped coke all over em. That Nathaniel kid was such a puss he started crying, and the Jonas kid just started mumbling and shaking. They had both fallen to the ground by the time we were done and almost all the seniors from school saw it. So you better believe the following Monday was GREAT!Every senior that saw them said something to em and some even gave em wedgies.I loved it.I was in heaven.Those little Brains deserve it.6

Well I got to school early Tuesday morning.We had an FFA meeting and i wanted to be early.When I walked into the south entrance near the gym, I saw Someone standing there.It was far too early for anyone else to be here.So I walked towards him, and that's when I saw it in his hand.... Jonas's hand.....the gun....and there was a loud high pitched sound in my ears.That little fag was crying but for some reason I felt tears on my own cheeks, and as I looked down at my hands I saw the blood.His laugh was the last thing I heard before....the darkness.....7

To every action there is an equal or greater reaction.8

Author notes

Funny how the things we say, the little things, can hurt others so much.I was like Jonas and Nathaniel.I suffered because of the other kids who hate different people.I suffered because I was misunderstood.

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  • May 2, 2005
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    wow I really liked it! Great Write..

  • troubled-love22
    April 26, 2005
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    Wicked Awsome

    ... wow donovan this was... intense.... i loved it. i dont know what else to say...
    ~Amber

  • raize
    April 25, 2005
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    AWESOME

    ROCK ON MAN, LONG LIVE THE COMPUTER GEEKS WOOOOO!!! SW4L

  • forgot2b3forgotten
    April 25, 2005
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    wow.. Wow.. I dont know what to say this was.. whoa.. intense but suber great.. I loved it