Unafraid

I'm the girl who has to push herself to trust because she's been hurt but I'm also the girl who will run outside and dance in the rain because she isn't afraid of anything.

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my favorite song is heartless

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  • Kagamine Rin
    November 26, 2008

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    Oh, a very good sentence. To me, it sounds a bit like a run-on sentence, but in another way, it doesn't. This is a very good entry, and I wish you luck in my contest.