Chapter One.1
Dear Mom,2
I am sorry to be writing this, but I feel You will be seeing me laying sprawled upon the caprpet in my room, a razor in my hand, and some Vicodine in the other hand. I feel I cannot go on with this life. I am sorry for all the mean things I have ever done to you. I hate the way I was. I also hate all those horrible things I did to you, daddy and Robby. I will miss you all.3
Tell Robby, I love him and I am sorry for ruining his life. Tell him he could of had better than me all his life. I am sorry I had to leave you all, but I couldn't possibly go on with this horrible life.4
Sincerly your loving daughter,5
Shaynuh.6
That was the last thing they remembered about their daughter. Her mother still can't get her daughters bloody, dead, cut wristed, still warm dead daughter.She still can't stop crying, till this day. Only three monthslater, but things still hurt after awhile, and they will for life7
To be continued! Sorry I am short of time right now.8
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Very good write, i do hope you add more to this for i am waiting to read the next part, keep up the good writing. Aeris
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Very good SHANNUH cough cough yea whou cant help but love rob...i mean robby.lol well any ways good story me likies but...a quick error
you said monthslater whenits 3 months later
any way good storey
jess
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this was pretty interesting for a beginning...i guess...it seems that this would be a nice story...how i would figure it would be that you give this at the beginning and you lead up to this at the middle and go on from there...this might be what i would do here...but this is only a suggestion...
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good
wow i take it you and your mom don't hit it off too well? well i am soory to here that...i once stole vicodin and tried to over dose but could not do that... yeah
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